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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by youthful_implants » Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:07 pm

new vocal ting.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by dav.id » Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:09 pm

youthful_implants wrote:new vocal ting.

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I really like the drum percussion in this one the, the sound like very fast scratches:), I think the vocals work really well one this one with the garage bassline:)
I think some shakers would give the beat some more flow though....


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almost all the percussion is sampled from vinyl and some pads too:)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TRaffikz » Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:44 pm

@ Jaydot: Intro is very cheerfull. Not a big fan of the yay's but i'm liking the other bass sounds
and the general atmosphere of the tune. Also digging the random crazyness at the end. Overall good work.

@ NRHc: Daaaaaaaamn looove it! The space on the wobbles is so trippy. Synth working is very good too.
Excellent job.

@ blazinaidan: I already liked that tune in its wip stage. Intro synths remind me so much of Wisp.
Very original and inspiring stuff. Keep em coming!

@ streetxlite: i'll comment on sc :)

@ dav.id: Very chill tune man. Really enjoyed that one. I must say, a vocal would've been cool to hear in there
but the brass make up for that i guess. Very very nice.

Here's mine. I'd love some feedback :D
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by streetxlite » Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:12 pm

jaydot wrote:Soundcloud

Remix I made of Kesek aka streetxlite's banger "Throat Saw". As per usual my internet won't buffer the players so I'll leave some feedback on tracks later (as I always do) :t:
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Thanks for the remix Jaydot, Big ups!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by worldpremiere » Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:11 pm

@ BadBoyBastian3B
I really dig the intro and that drop is really nice but imo this one would definately sound better with a solid sub.
@jaydot
I feel the idea, nice intro but then it just the build up just flows into the drop in a way you can't really hear a drop. too much going on in this one for my taste.
@finji (page 19)
i really like this one. Melodies are really nice and soothing. I think you should work more on mixing and structure. At moments there's just too much sounds and strange noises at the same time.
@dav.id
really nice tune man. i feel like smoking now and that's what i'm going to do in a bit. anyway.. lovely!
@TRaffikz
that intro is a bit too long imo, try to shorten it a bit..and that rolling kicks part before the drop, it goes for a bit too long. other than that, its a nice track!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by NRHc » Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:12 am

Thanks traffikz really appreciate it :)
I really like your tune too,but like the other one said,I would cut the intro a bit otherwise great track!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by NRHc » Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:50 am

@traffikz
you know what?
after listening to it again I like the intro like it is,i think the build up fits well like that!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by r_byron » Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:54 am

hey, already done my three comments, made a new mix down of my track ;

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Depone » Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:58 am

r_byron wrote:hey, already done my three comments, made a new mix down of my track ;

http://soundcloud.com/r_byron/unititled-26-08-10

how do you get the soundcloud widget? do you have to pay for it?
When you post, see those boxes above your text, one of them soys soundcloud. just drop the url of the tune in there

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by AL4228 » Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:49 pm

@r_byron - Nice minimal bro... great vibe on that, vocals, you hit it all... great production (Should PM me a 320) :)

@world-premiere - the synth at 1:09 doesn't really seem to fit the track, digin the rest of it though, good work

@traffikz - Great synth work, likeing the reverse that was added, as was stated in the comments, a pause before the drop for a vocal or somethin, maybe a 1 huge snare hit would be cool, but even without it it's great work. big ups

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by ilv1 » Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:10 pm

@ youthful_implants: Reminds me of Radiohead - National Anthem I think.... Awesome bass line but I'm not a fan of the vocal sample.

@ TRaffikz: Nice intro but just a tad bit too long for my taste... Love the way it continues... Pretty chill yet hard. Nice!

@ worldpremiere: Digging the breaks. The old video game sounds are a nice touch but I don't know about the part at 0:55... Also the drums could use some more power.

@ AL4228: Nice bass but I'm not a fan of the synth. It sounds a bit old-school I guess... Idk. Other than that it's a good track.

Now here's mine... It's a Drumstep. Would really appreciate some feedback as the track is not necessarily finished and I'll change some things if you got any good ideas.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by ItsK » Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:22 pm

streetxlite wrote:
jaydot wrote:Soundcloud

Remix I made of Kesek aka streetxlite's banger "Throat Saw". As per usual my internet won't buffer the players so I'll leave some feedback on tracks later (as I always do) :t:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Faptasia » Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:30 am

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man, theres some good amateur producers in this post! has to be said!!

this is my first dubsep track so its a bit iffy as i wasnt completely sure on the synths etc

but any feedback is good feedback imo!


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Vibesmusic » Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:17 pm

A Dub influenced dubstep tune:

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Chilled Dubstep with some jazzy chords:

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Chilled, mellow kinda Dubstep tune:

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Feedback would be niceee.. if u like what you hear please comment on the soundcloud clip as i am lacking comments. :lol:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by circusjam » Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:54 pm

eyup peeps.
this is my first post on dubstepforum, just wondering what you all think of my latest track. all feedback welcome!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TM45 » Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:38 pm

@CollisonCourse: Interesting beats there. I'd have to say it sounds a little bare, with not much going on. What you've got is some pretty sick percussion, that might need a little filtering and compressing, but is good rhythmlicly. The bass is very straight, but a nice sound.
A good start, but needs some work if it's gonna all it can be. Try adding in some more levels, more sounds of some synth perhaps, get some vibes flowing.

@Vibesmusic: Early-bird is lovely, really nice flowing piece. Got a fantastic lunge jazz feel, great for cruisin to! The bottom one is nice also, why don't you combine the two tracks to make one? more variation in both that way!

@circusjam: Good stuff in there. I'd rather you'd stayed away from generic chainsaw stuff, but some of the rest of the track is really nice, sub hits hard and the percussion is banging. Nice track overall ^_^

Right, 2 tracks for you :) Feedback most appreciated.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Olux » Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:45 pm

@ Circusjam - Did not expect such crazy bass after the intro. I was surprised but enjoyed the song alot. Thought the bass instuments sounded cool.

@ Vibesmusic - (regrets aim) - nice chilled out track, kinda hip hoppy i thought which i liked. (early bird) - Thought it was good, nice drums good flow. but maybe needed a bit more going on. Maybe another couple leads or something. (lanky dan) - Diggin the lounge vibe. Nice flow and a really cool feel. Definately my favourite of the 3.

@ ilv1 - I like this song. It's odd. Like a mildy tranquilised circus based adventure.. or something. Interesting listen, cheers.

@ kaza - Nice one, sounding good. Like the big snare and nice melodies. Good flow.

Here's a track i have been working on and i think i'm done. All feedback welcome. Cheers.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by steeze » Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:04 pm

@ TM45 Just checked out the top track, Im liking the lfo synth working with the sub bass, sounds nice. The drums sound good aswell nice rhythms here, the glass smash sample sounds a bit too much like glass smashing, obviously if thats what you were going for then thats cool, but if it was me I would have tried to get it to sound like something comepletely new and different. The track has a nice minimalistic feel to it. I also like the beepy kinda synth, works well with the other sounds. Nice work.

@ Circusjam Caught my interest right from the word go, nice dubby feel in the intro with the delay etc. Bit of a cliche sample to use before the drop, but all is forgiven when the bassline comes in, some really nice sounds here especially that second part that comes in, and it all gels together quite well. Only really criticism I have is that the snare sounds very dry, try adding some reverb to aid with the dubby feel in the intro. Although there isnt much variation from the first to second drop (the waveforms look almost identical) you still get a sense of progression and like something is happening. Really nice work here man :)

@ Vibesmusic Im liking this, really nice sounds here, good use of offbeat synth stabs, and good job keeping them interesting rather than just on beats 2 & 4 all the time. I enjoy the chords and notes used aswell, especially on that trumpet sounding part. Good work with the subs, good balance with the rest of the track and it sounds interesting, without clashing with any of the other elements. Good stuff.

Here's my newest track, Soundcloud let me know what you think. Any crits shall be returned :) Thanks

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by dubplateguy » Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:05 pm

Reviewed quite a few tracks earlier in the month, so here is another new track for you all. Feedback is much appreciated.
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