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therzbm · Post by **therzbm** » Fri May 01, 2009 12:19 am

Legendary wrote:
Dub1 wrote:
Dub1 wrote:need Feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59193679f3251da0/
feedback would be appreciated.
I'd bring out the drums more / use more distinctive snares - i'd say thats the only thing lacking to the tune a really nice big snare hit.. its what that sort of style strives on.

couldnt agree more, seems a bit too focused on the synths, get the kick snare coming out a bit more and maybe work a little bit more on the drum pattern and it will be sounding great

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Fri May 01, 2009 9:20 am

Dub1 wrote:need Feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59193679f3251da0/

Yeah the drums seem fairly masked they need bringing out, try cutting some of the frequency content out of the synths to help them gel together and make space for the drums

@ -boring

It has a really dark vibe to it, the vocal parts seem a little suffocated I'd cut around 1k on the other instruments to bring a bit more intelligebility through thats all I can think of though and its not really that much of an issue

@ Chewie

That tune is nice and heavy, I can't think of much to improve it tbh soz

My new tune I've moved back to reason so Im still adjusting to it, I've gotten a bit stuck so I've come to seek guidance

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59445928a9c785db/

chewie · Post by **chewie** » Fri May 01, 2009 10:23 am

Cheers LP just finished this sucker off today just need to bump it up for playing out then get the sucker mastered. Big ups!

FSTZ1 · Post by **FSTZ1** » Fri May 01, 2009 1:37 pm

^^^nice one man!

it's a keeper

feral witchchild · Post by **feral witchchild** » Fri May 01, 2009 8:02 pm

Just put up a rough mix of a new one on the myspazz, link in sig. Any and all comments are welcome.

batlogic · Post by **batlogic** » Fri May 01, 2009 8:49 pm

Hey, This is my latest attempt

steered this one clear of any wobbles, trying to explore the whole genre a bit, i hope...

X

http://soundcloud.com/batlogic/3am

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Fri May 01, 2009 11:26 pm

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/M15%2 ... xample.mp3

A little something I'm working on now, just drums and bass at this point, but not sure if I'm gonna finish it or not...I'm not at home now, but I'll leave some feedback on other peoples tracks when I can hear them on proper speakers.

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat May 02, 2009 3:22 am

http://www.zippyshare.com/v/83140189/file.html

just started this one a few hours ago
going for a burial/ambient vibe

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Sat May 02, 2009 8:27 am

Dub1 wrote:need Feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59193679f3251da0/

Yeah the drums seem fairly masked they need bringing out, try cutting some of the frequency content out of the synths to help them gel together and make space for the drums

@ -boring

It has a really dark vibe to it, the vocal parts seem a little suffocated I'd cut around 1k on the other instruments to bring a bit more intelligebility through thats all I can think of though and its not really that much of an issue

@ Chewie

That tune is nice and heavy, I can't think of much to improve it tbh soz

@ Bat logic

lol you stayed clear of bass wobbles but theres that high wobbling sound all the way through. I thought it was pretty cool, i'd thin the synth sounds out a bit with some eq maybe

@ Knob goblin

this is sounding cool, the drums are at a nice loud level, really dark, keep at it mate

@ Deadly Habbit

This is deep man, I'm really feelin it again I'd strip away some of the frequency content of the instruments/ more layers of verb but the drums are spot on

My new tune I've moved back to reason so Im still adjusting to it, I've gotten a bit stuck so I've come to seek guidance

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59445928a9c785db/

would appreciate some feedback guys

beeliner · Post by **beeliner** » Sat May 02, 2009 11:12 am

ez guys my first attempt @ my work in progress

slate it! like it! love it! hate it!

made using ableton live 7.3

here it is "base" by beeliner

http://soundcloud.com/beeline-b/c-users ... eliner-bee

ez

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Sat May 02, 2009 5:19 pm

beeliner wrote:ez guys my first attempt @ my work in progress

slate it! like it! love it! hate it!

made using ableton live 7.3

here it is "base" by beeliner

http://soundcloud.com/beeline-b/c-users ... eliner-bee

ez

no

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat May 02, 2009 5:26 pm

Lowpass wrote: @ Deadly Habbit

This is deep man, I'm really feelin it again I'd strip away some of the frequency content of the instruments/ more layers of verb but the drums are spot on

My new tune I've moved back to reason so Im still adjusting to it, I've gotten a bit stuck so I've come to seek guidance

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59445928a9c785db/

would appreciate some feedback guys

thanks man haven't even really started the mixdown phase yet

as far as your wip i'd layer up the snare a bit more maybe with a clap and maybe toss in some stabs in the backdrop

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Sat May 02, 2009 8:46 pm

cool, I've got a clap in there already but I could put it higher in the mix, when you say stabs what sort of instrument did you have in mind?

deadly_habit · Post by **deadly_habit** » Sat May 02, 2009 9:03 pm

Lowpass wrote:cool, I've got a clap in there already but I could put it higher in the mix, when you say stabs what sort of instrument did you have in mind?

maybe some rhodes, sirens classic air horn

[binge] · Post by **[binge]** » Sat May 02, 2009 11:11 pm

word all
new to the forum and it seems like a really kick ass community you got going on. Love the fact you have a section for works in progress as id be interested to hear some dubstep producers opinions on my productions!
I'm not strictly a dubstep producer, my tunes are more of a hybrid between Dubstep and Techno, Dubstep infused techno if you will, i hope you enjoy them!
I'll be posting more tunes in the coming days.

i don't really like posting y tracks on zshare, but i trust that people are pretty legit in this forum and wont nick things.

[binge]-'Let Them Have The Stage, As Long As I Don't Have To Be In The Crowd'
http://www.zshare.net/audio/59513027da031907/

oh and if your on soundcloud hit me up, quite active round those parts.

www.soundcloud.com/binge
www.virb.com/binge

beeliner · Post by **beeliner** » Sun May 03, 2009 8:08 am

@ lowpassdub why the long face?

your track 789......... absolute filth mate!!!!! nuff said!

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Sun May 03, 2009 8:29 am

beeliner wrote:@ lowpassdub why the long face?

your track 789......... absolute filth mate!!!!! nuff said!

lol thanks I get like that in this thread, don't take it personally.

truncated · Post by **truncated** » Mon May 04, 2009 6:50 pm

maybe i should of looked in here before posting in the dub section ah well no harm done!

Confused Stomper

http://soundcloud.com/truncated/king-k0 ... ed-stomper

or

http://www.zshare.net/audio/595904187229b3d1/

been gettiing back into making music and decided recently i'm going to run with my love for evil noises this is my current project i have open hope you lot like it!

truncated · Post by **truncated** » Mon May 04, 2009 6:55 pm

Deadly Habit wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/5930884974bfc868/

writing this to use as a transitional piece to switch up the genres in my dj sets

i like this, would work rather well for what you want it to!

is the finished version about?

Deadly Habit wrote:http://www.zippyshare.com/v/83140189/file.html

just started this one a few hours ago
going for a burial/ambient vibe

again really feeling this got the ambience spot on

resktwo wrote:any feedback on this one would be appreciated, kinda not sure if its good or not, it's still very basic, didn't even put hats into it..
the question is: should i even work on it? my ears are'nt objective, is it interesting? does it have potential ? should i delete everything before the last loop or maybe the other way around?

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=8be0 ... 8114394287

not sure on the first lead sound, like the second lead sound needs more weight behind it though, i like where your going though keep on pluggin away!

pk- · Post by **pk-** » Tue May 05, 2009 4:58 pm

http://www.pjpk.net/fucksake.mp3

never going to finish it

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