thanks for the feedback dfaultuzr haha you are right i just took the acapella as it is and threw it over the track at those parts i might need to go back and address those problems
@jizzman those pannig sounds destroy my head lol in a good way. you have this indi video game sound vibe
bassline is really mellow. maybe one element on top would complete it ? like a top melody or some of the bassnotes go up one octave. besides that the whole vibe is on point love the mini sounds
@dfaultuzr crackles

surprisingly similar imo to jizzmans could be on the same compilation :3
love all the send effects you used like all those dub delays and long reverbs. the vibe sits well dig the dark moody bassline. hm maybe the sub a tad harder ? nice stereofield. would love to hear you taking it to another "level" (with like vocals or a really dark big pad ) after the drop at 1 12. it never really hits a real highpoint for me personally that would be my only concern
@fragments the strings def play a nice melody man ♥ some sounds remind me of ghosts of breslau
its a wierd song man haha but i like it its more like a look in your head. overall too long for me to keep interest though. agree with nowayjayz you could raise the volume easily even without limiting it you have your ideas down jsut compress them a bit into sth thats still artistic but on the other hand easy to listen too( which is of course just my opinion)
@mks
not sure about the metal start
developes into sth really nice when those old school pads come in at around 1 10 wouldnt drop them so soon they make it really full and nice
could see them maybe just go lowpass abit and come back for this high clicky melody
hm and maybe try chopping the acid loop at the last third to a dif rhythm
@yeah really dark beginning ahah love the drop not sure about the high stabs could see it work without them really or with a moving filter on them like bandpass so its not that high :3 but besides that
really nice groove enough development to keep it going. again i could see some more occasional breaks in the main loop like stop drum roll back to the loop