@JemGrover - Thanks. I'll take all the progression advice posted into mind. I really like the track in your sig.
Really steppy and just makes you want to nod your head. Everything seems to fit together well..simple but compliments eachother well.
@Tripwire - Drums and the bass sound nice together. The track just feels a bit empty to me for some reason?
Sounds well produced and everything but seems like it could use some more elements to keep it rolling.
@paravrais - Digging the track in your sig! Always good to hear wobble not being hammered in the typical way.
Beautiful intro!
@ bass_killa - Intro has a pretty dark feel surrounding it. Drum pattern itself isn't bad but they sound a bit plain/stocky. I'd
beef them up a bit and tweak some FX or what not to get them sounding more "full". Basically the main thing
I'd critique is that wobble you've got going on. Don't feel as if you HAVE to include a "wobble" into your music.
I enjoyed the track a lot more without it. If you do include it though I'd definitely suggest processing it some more
and just trying to revamp the sound and build upon it. It sounds very out of place in regards to the rest of the tune.
@ Mortal - Hear you on the percussive progression and having more catchy/rolling basslines. I really do need to
put in a bit of work on my basslines. I'd suggest taking a bit out of the intro or introducing more after the drop. I sort of
feel like the intro builds up too much for the drop that follows..like it builds you up then drops you into something
that feels like it's reverted to the intro sort of. Just not my style of tune to begin with but you've got variety on that synth
switching up I just feel like you need something else in the background to keep it interesting. Maybe introduce
some percussion in after a few bars after the drop and give the drums a little more liveliness.
@ haploid - Track in your sig sounds like you're off to a good start. Very dark and heavy, rolling bass. Gets a lot
more interesting after the 2nd drop. Gets a bit repetitive making it through the first though.
Damn that was a lot of typing.
Damn, that image is big. Transitions between Letters (A to B or vice versa) sound the most natural. Transitions to neighbor numbers are also ok.
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