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@antman - I'd personally put a little reverb on the snare and add some subtle effects in the intro. The bass is pretty slow compared to the intro beat, not sure if that's the effect you were aiming for but it's a little anti-climactic. Or it might be because you slowed down the melody of the stab sound from the beginning. Cool track so far though, I love the buildup whoosh.

@jakedubber - On first listen I found the intro synth (at the very start) a little choppy with such low release, and the main synth came in harsher than I expected (wonder how it would sound slightly deeper/darker if that makes sense). Otherwise, it's sounding sick... great intro, and everything is very refreshing and original. Love the "how romantic" sample, where'd you find that?
@NICORISONE - i can already imagine rising string-type pads, subtle ambient background noises, etc. Sub-bass would be nice, don't think it needs a heavy bass drop. A grimey high-attack synth coming in and out could be cool. Overall, I'm seeing this one as chill, but that's just my type of music.