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gussie tea · Post by **gussie tea** » Thu May 14, 2009 4:38 pm

I posted in the other production thread, but as this is more for unfinshed stufff. I'm back here.

I want it to sound a bit lo-fi but i think it's just sounding crap at the moment. It's also really quiet becuase i rendered straight from ableton.

anyway, feedback is appreciated.

edgar_pr · Post by **edgar_pr** » Fri May 15, 2009 12:15 am

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Fri May 15, 2009 4:32 pm

Gussie Tea, interesting sounds! should sound even better afta a mix down

germskiller · Post by **germskiller** » Fri May 15, 2009 5:47 pm

http://soundcloud.com/g-main

Need feedback on these two tracks. Both need mastering and deeper bass

Gwan.

[binge] · Post by **[binge]** » Fri May 15, 2009 9:00 pm

@Gussie Tea- Swear your myspace background was about to give me a bloody epileptic fit, but apart from that, i really enjoyed the track mate, nice production aesthetic, dope sounds. I dont think it needs the accordian(or whatever it is) chords. The synthy deal that comes in is a bit hectic for my liking, think the tune sounds ill without it. Great work bud, just work on the mixing (something i also gotta do with my tunes)

@germskiller-yo man, the bass n the chords on White Wash, dont sound too good together imo, also a bit too wobble wobble dubstep for my liking, but a good track none the less, good work man.

@boring-ez, agree with viralcode, needs the 'zest' as he put it, pretty trippy shit tho.

got some new tunes on soundcloud, not strictly dubstep, but enjoy

www.soundcloud.com/binge

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sat May 16, 2009 12:46 am

G - main Dutch courage just needs a bigger drum sound, may b layer them up a bit, but nice tune!
White wash is kool, sounds much bigger

wanting to hear the snare come thru a bit more..

Any 1 any thoughts on this?!? (bmore preview)

http://virb.com/fuzz2k (first in the playa)

edgar_pr · Post by **edgar_pr** » Sat May 16, 2009 3:08 am

Gibz wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/599154382d228567/

Should I finish it?

HELL YESSS! what you done soo far is soo good. great mix of percusion and the sound effects are all clear as fuck. beat is slipped inbetween the bass nicely. the song makes me think ranking records

im also reposting 'Skypirates' my attempt of Dubstep vs IDM. slightly updated since the last post. still wanna get some feedback on it.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/600778025287dff5/

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Sat May 16, 2009 3:52 pm

This is a new track i started last night..

33 bar intro.... I'm liking it

Sun Dub

Code: Select all

http://rapidshare.com/files/233694746/Sun_001.mp3

hit me up with your thoughts!

rhek · Post by **rhek** » Sat May 16, 2009 4:39 pm

Old myspace.. Made theese with FL and dunno whether to try carry em on with my new setup..

http://www.myspace.com/locustlung First three tracks.. Not exactly dubby more techy grime or i dunno. There no where near finished.

viralcode · Post by **viralcode** » Sat May 16, 2009 4:42 pm

Rhek wrote:Old myspace.. Made theese with FL and dunno whether to try carry em on with my new setup..

http://www.myspace.com/locustlung First three tracks.. Not exactly dubby more techy grime or i dunno. There no where near finished.

i only listened to blockade... but fuck man... that shits militant! in fact i love this track.... damn

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sat May 16, 2009 4:46 pm

viralcode wrote: hit me up with your thoughts!

im liking it 2 man, nice undertone tones of darkness! the kick/bell hit sounds fresh also! good to hear it when its done

@ Binge, Dharma is well dark

nice work! Untitled has a wicked groove 2 it, you've certainly drawn for the twisted evil vibe in this 1

My tune B-more dub - any ideas to keep it interesting?!?!?!

http://virb.com/fuzz2k nice1

rhek · Post by **rhek** » Sat May 16, 2009 4:49 pm

viralcode wrote:
Rhek wrote:Old myspace.. Made theese with FL and dunno whether to try carry em on with my new setup..

http://www.myspace.com/locustlung First three tracks.. Not exactly dubby more techy grime or i dunno. There no where near finished.

i only listened to blockade... but fuck man... that shits militant! in fact i love this track.... damn

Cheers man

. Still not sure bout some of the sub parts in the first section but yeaah. Likin your intro got a wicked atmos to it, Beefy kit too.

obri3n · Post by **obri3n** » Sat May 16, 2009 11:08 pm

Feedback Wanted // First Tracks:

Ok, there not even whole tracks yet, but would like to hear some feedback on the bits ive got to show, see if theres anything good worth spending more time on or just move on and scrap the lot

Two Youtube Links to mini mixes of the loops:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x9TTcgPo ... annel_page

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ej00essT ... annel_page

[binge] · Post by **[binge]** » Sat May 16, 2009 11:35 pm

@obri3n-you gotta be kidding with the you tube links, post it on a filesharing site or myspace at least, the sound quality on you tube is beyond bad

obri3n · Post by **obri3n** » Sun May 17, 2009 12:29 am

[binge] wrote:@obri3n-you gotta be kidding with the you tube links, post it on a filesharing site or myspace at least, the sound quality on you tube is beyond bad

Righto... Im on it...

Just changed the bass sound already thanks to feedback from my flatmate and some ableton wizardry tips!

***

First one: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JG1RN5Z9
Second: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=G4WD3PYP

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sun May 17, 2009 1:25 am

edgar_pr wrote:'Skypirates'

the build up is amazing! drop is nice 2, the only thing id do is have a stronger (or louder) snare after the drop..

@ RHek - your tunes are all fat, you got your sound locked

@ obri3n - very tidy wobble indeed, imo u just need to pump up the background pads to make them come thru a bit more in the mix

Need help with this http://virb.com/fuzz2k (Robocop)

not mixed down yet... just wondering how to make it sound fuller?!?!

comments, thoughts much appreciated! peace

therzbm · Post by **therzbm** » Sun May 17, 2009 2:53 am

fuzz_2k wrote:
edgar_pr wrote:'Skypirates'
the build up is amazing! drop is nice 2, the only thing id do is have a stronger (or louder) snare after the drop..

@ RHek - your tunes are all fat, you got your sound locked

@ obri3n - very tidy wobble indeed, imo u just need to pump up the background pads to make them come thru a bit more in the mix

Need help with this http://virb.com/fuzz2k (Robocop)

not mixed down yet... just wondering how to make it sound fuller?!?!

comments, thoughts much appreciated! peace

maybe just bring the bass and wobble a bit more up as well the the atmospheric stuff, as it seems that beep and the drums are most prominent and the bass doesnt really lead the track so much. seems like a quality tune at the moment though.

http://soundcloud.com/therzbm/zombies-mix

im only a few months in to producing and this is my first attempt at anything with vocals, only done a few hours work on it and cant really feel where to go next to get it going. structure of it is very rough and short, and a bit thin at the moment, tips and feedback appreciated

rhek · Post by **rhek** » Sun May 17, 2009 11:23 am

Fuzz Robocop is sick. Got that Techy sound down. Only thing i'd say is maybe let a bit more of the bass freqs through on the midrange, still, sounding pro as fuck.

fuzz_2k · Post by **fuzz_2k** » Sun May 17, 2009 10:29 pm

TheRZBM wrote:
im only a few months in to producing and this is my first attempt at anything with vocals, only done a few hours work on it and cant really feel where to go next to get it going. structure of it is very rough and short, and a bit thin at the moment, tips and feedback appreciated

lovley guitar in this! and the vocal fits nicely to, i dont think the wobble quite fits yet but keep at it the tune sounds good!

xqstghost · Post by **xqstghost** » Mon May 18, 2009 12:31 pm

http://www.box.net/shared/4soo83tubl
julia's ET (bells and bells)

i like the sound on this one and hello everyone this is my first post

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