WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

[JBE]

Sorry for not posting any feedback earlier. I ended up getting really sick the other day and I've barely been able to get out of bed let alone sit at a computer for more than 2 minutes. Today I finally felt good enough to get out of bed and do some stuff before I went back to sleep so I can work tonight.

@Bledbox: I was really liking that. I think it could definitely use some more bass though.

@mmplisskin: I really didn't like the kick. I think you go the right idea you just need to go bigger with your beat samples. Could use some more subbass to.

@Tripwire22: I was digging it. It sounded very tribal in a way.

@Weedcali: I was really liking the chilled out vibe of the song. I thought the beat fit perfectly with rhythm of the bass and synths.

@Haack: Very nice. Love the dark vibe the song gives off. I was really digging those wobble spikes.

@Nruen: Off the hook man. Loved it. I loved how you changed up the beat in the second part to, gave it a really nice sound.

@redjuan: I don't really see what else you could really do in this. With just what you have there you got a really nice vibe. It's got that nice classic dark dubstep sound. It's not like you need the song to be 5 minutes long. I bet if you just found a way to increase the length of a few parts just to give the listener something to groove to for a little bit it would be great. Even if its only like 2:30 long. Maybe bring in a few new samples in the beat to change it up a bit, but don't mess with the vibe from the synths cause they sound really good together.

@Beatdemo: Thanks for the feedback. That's kinda what I was going for. It wasn't meant to be a banger or anything, I just wanted something you could relax and listen to. As for your track. I never was one for that particular style but I understand what it is that draws people to it, and for that you've done a great job. There's nice variety in the track to keep you interested without losing the actual groove of the track itself. Might just be me but I actually felt that the kick was weaker than the actual song dictated it should be.

Well that's about all I can muster for today. That's pretty much stuff from page 1 I think. I'll try to get to some more tommorrow depending on how I'm feeling.

[globalbabylon]

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Feedback appreciated
Dubious

[lp]

Thanks for the feedback people, @graftek there must be something to critize in the tune

@graftek - Flow of the track is working mate, makes me wanna swivel in my chair! Loving the stabby lead adds nice movment to the groove but I think its calling for some more automation. Latly a few edits to break up the flow would work well.

@kongtigobeats - Real good work, different to a lot of things I've been hearing recently. Didn't ever feel like I wanted to skip through any of it which is always a good sign and the melody and fx have been engineered well into the track. The distorted synth layer that comes in over the main synth/pad I feel is a little bit too much but this could be how you like it, maybe a bit of eqing may be neccessary or just turnin it down in the mix. Oh and before I forget the percussion is too quiet but like I said very cool stuff.

[charliefoy]

@Charliefoy
Hehe I find these things kinda difficult say. Since I don't want to influence your track to much. There are a few things you could try tho. Try and find some short sounds. So you can add a bit more viaration and got some more input for playing around with the dealy and reverb (in general I think your snare could use a bit more reverb). Try to come up with some alternative hi-hat patterns (maybe even add diffrent ones). Shuffle them around and see what happens. Experiment with pads. Stuff like this.

Cheers man ill have a go

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feedbackk??? VVVV

[WAG]

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I think I have a potential monster on my hands with this... The breakdown at the end is my favorite part and it was sort of an accident. Kinda rippin on the metalcore thing haha.
EDIT: UPDATED! Remastered a little bit. Added some samples, extended some parts.

Gonna start blasting through this May thread giving out opinions before it gets too huge.

[tripwire22]

@LP veeeerrryy deep my friend this is a tune nothing bad can be said about this

@graftik i like where uve started but def needs some variations in the loop but i like ur chosen sounds so far

[tripwire22]

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brand new idk how to feel about it since i made it so fast

[IntrudaB2BAngel]

New to the Game.... Not Marstered yet still demo... so..... Here it is ....
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Please Let Us Know !!

[IntrudaB2BAngel]

New to the Game.... Not Marstered yet still demo... so..... Here it is ....
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Please Let Us Know !!

[IntrudaB2BAngel]

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@goldorak- Ok Good flow , but theres no peaks or any other movement through the tune.
However i like the way you have composed the beat as it goes through.


@redjuan- Track 1) Very slow to get peaking, unusual flows in this one. Be intrested to see the finished result
Track 2) ADD BASELINES! If your going for a dubstep feel anyway... But the foundation of the track is good.

@tagme- Boppin beat wicked effects, nice drops Alot of potential this track


Good Stuff People

[ironik]

@wag: liking your tune quite alot let me know when its finished, strictly banger only though haha not for chillin .
@dubious: your bass is so clean, your tunes something to study to haha gets me mellow as. i like

this is my tune it hasnt been mastered at all and its obv not finished
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feedback appreciated thanks.

[jaspervc]

Would love some more feedback Thanks..
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[IntrudaB2BAngel]

GIVE FEEDBACK TO RECIVE FEEDBACK !!!!

[tripwire22]

GIVE FEEDBACK TO RECIVE FEEDBACK !!!!

u get my message cuz dsf was down

[IntrudaB2BAngel]

GIVE FEEDBACK TO RECIVE FEEDBACK !!!!

u get my message cuz dsf was down

Yeah it sound very speedy at the begining.. i would suggest slowinging it down maybe then drop to original speed?

[IntrudaB2BAngel]

PLUS PLUS PLUS.... the beat in the begining give you the impresion of something different than the end result bless

[tripwire22]

PLUS PLUS PLUS.... the beat in the begining give you the impresion of something different than the end result bless

for what song?

[IntrudaB2BAngel]

PLUS PLUS PLUS.... the beat in the begining give you the impresion of something different than the end result bless

for what song?

This one here my freind.

[Craggle]

Not sure if i posted on this fourm or the other, but none the less , this is no where being done just wanted so feedback, will post reviews of tracks after
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