Gross, sporatic and different tune, need feedback

[rawhead]

Sounds big,maybe automating little bit on the main (lead) synth ...

[DiggyTots]

I like the form a lot, and the sound is legit... The only problem I have, the turd sitting on top of the perfect apple pie, is your Modern Talking bass. Everybody uses it nowadays, and I absolutely hate it. Drop it, you could replace it with a scream, a vocoded yell through a LFO bass sound, a yoy, anything really. Just please, PLEASE get rid of it.

thank you :>

[Monstro]

The hilarious thing is you are wrong about the origin of this sound, the "modern talking" bass you are referring to is a synth bass resampled through a ringmod and automated, thanks for the feedback though.

[conclude]

I like it man. And the bass is perfectly nasty. Interesting idea too. The snare, though, sounds a bit weak. Maybe you should give it a low frequency boost, around 300 or so?

[houselove8491]

The instrumentation is real nice, like the melody is sik. I feel as though the bass drop could be more intense- with a filter sweep or something. This is sik tho, it's got a real serious feel to it, like it could be featured in a post apocalyptic film.

[hood_e]

Hey man I love the intro, definetely sets a "scary robot chasing you" kind of feel especially with the "roar" in there just to remind you something bad is coming. the synth build up creates a nice urgency. the drop doesn't have the force Id like but Im listening to it through cheap headphones. As you said the bass is in there its probably just not coming through for me at least. love the wobbles, nice variety and you've kept the robotic sound going with them. the drums at the end got a little repetitive but i'm at no experience to suggest where you could go with them other than that man I like it. I know this isn't the most technical feedback but just telling you what my brain is experiencing

[slightly green]

Sweet Tune Love the basslines and drum patterns

[firestone416]

Hello all, I have been creeping this forums unregistered for a loooong time, building my chops to get at a level that I feel comfortable producing and releasing tunes. This track has been through every computer issue imaginable, 2 crashes a new computer build and everything else you can possibly throw at a song to try and kill it, yet it lives on. I really enjoy this one, and I would greatly appreciate any feedback I can get, and will gladly give feedback in return.

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I think your basslines/wobbles/ModernTalking should be the main attraction in this, and by that I mean that you should drown out the background synth a little bit. It would sound 50 times better. Thanks for the feedback on mine. Oh and also, a white noise filter sweep would intensify your drop tons.

[sburke1]

sounds great man, you could maybe filter or effect out that main arpeggiator to give it some more movement perhaps. sound dope tho!

[Monstro]

Well, the new version I was talking about is finished, but I need to get a Soundcloud premium account to replace the file and keep my metadata, which I will get to sometime later this week. So, I will make a whole new thread for the final version and beg for you all to give me updated feedback, thanks for all the comments so far and everything!

[BeastModeForDummies]

this sounds mean as fuck, let me know when its available!

[Electric_Head]

nice track dude.
very interesting resampling work on the bassline.

I feel it doesn`t hold a beat though, seems to focus more on the change-ups than beat.
Maybe that`s the goal though.

Check out my sig tune if you get the chance.

[Monstro]

not bad, big vibes, i would say listen to halicopter showdown and come back and tell me if i hold a beat because that is more of what im going for, repetition bore the crap outta me.

[Electric_Head]

I enjoyed your processing work so I`ll definitely check out some other tunes.