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Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
@Craggle - amazing track, very jokeresque i like it...only thing id say layer the snare more make it punch more, that would make the track roll better!
@buddstep - this song is nasty, however i cant really here much low end to the main gritty bass
@Lightshapers - Wicked vibezz, only thing id say the hi hats sound a bit bunched, id get them a bit more consistent maybe some quieter some louder to make the song bounce more!
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@buddstep - this song is nasty, however i cant really here much low end to the main gritty bass
@Lightshapers - Wicked vibezz, only thing id say the hi hats sound a bit bunched, id get them a bit more consistent maybe some quieter some louder to make the song bounce more!
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Hey guys,
First of all, loving all the tunes on here, always interested in undiscovered talent
@amphibian - that bass on "Serenity" is a top notch sub, love it, the ambience of the track is nice aswell, maybe a nice chord-type pad over the first drop? just an idea but otherwise properly nice track
@JLproductions - mate, loving the vibe of "bandwith", proper original style to it, hard to find something wrong with it, unless i could be stupidly anal and say the open hi hat is a bit too bright, but seriously loving this track, nicely
@EDN - "dedicated" is a banger mate, reminds a bit of bonobo
for me, the clarity seems alrite, but i over do clarity on some of my tunes, ive been told, but other than that, properly nice, loving the strings aswell
Heres my latest dubstep tune "Drifting", its more of a kinda summery tune, bit more lively than usual:
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Also got a 90's influenced track you guys could check out, would love some feeback on these:
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Cheers
Elliott M
First of all, loving all the tunes on here, always interested in undiscovered talent

@amphibian - that bass on "Serenity" is a top notch sub, love it, the ambience of the track is nice aswell, maybe a nice chord-type pad over the first drop? just an idea but otherwise properly nice track

@JLproductions - mate, loving the vibe of "bandwith", proper original style to it, hard to find something wrong with it, unless i could be stupidly anal and say the open hi hat is a bit too bright, but seriously loving this track, nicely
@EDN - "dedicated" is a banger mate, reminds a bit of bonobo

Heres my latest dubstep tune "Drifting", its more of a kinda summery tune, bit more lively than usual:
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Also got a 90's influenced track you guys could check out, would love some feeback on these:
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Cheers
Elliott M
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Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
eliottm - wrong tune
try this:
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As for your track...
it's lackinga lot of low-end, but otherwise I feel the whole tune is really, really nice. Love the upbeat, happy feeling. Beautiful work on the vocals as well! I feel the Intro I needs some work but what... I couldn't tell you. tbh I love your style - where you from?

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As for your track...
it's lackinga lot of low-end, but otherwise I feel the whole tune is really, really nice. Love the upbeat, happy feeling. Beautiful work on the vocals as well! I feel the Intro I needs some work but what... I couldn't tell you. tbh I love your style - where you from?
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Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
Finished, from the feedback here on this thread. Replaced the snare, beefed up the kick, eq'd most elements, more variation pre-breakdowns and post-drops.etc. Off to the engineers
also added in some rolling rides at certain points in the track. Enjoy!
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@Elliottm - Thanks for the feedback on Bandwidth
I really love the drums in 'drifting' they are so bouncy and energetic, nice work, cant fault anything in that one its genius! Maybe its just my speakers, but the drums sound a little quiet in 'Spring' compared to the bass...
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@zerbaman: help me name this tune, instantly favorited that shit. proper vibes on that
@orps: very nice also. only thing i would of like to hear is them hats at 20 second to come back in later at somepoint
@JLproductions-dissorganized: weighty all i can say....
@amphibian: nothing bad to say either. sounding crisp
just wanted to let you guys know i'm feelin it! big ups and keep it up!
might start looking for the people that need some criticism now.
@orps: very nice also. only thing i would of like to hear is them hats at 20 second to come back in later at somepoint
@JLproductions-dissorganized: weighty all i can say....
@amphibian: nothing bad to say either. sounding crisp
just wanted to let you guys know i'm feelin it! big ups and keep it up!
might start looking for the people that need some criticism now.
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haha my bad, thats a proper nice tune aswell, nicely done mate! yeh i was going back and forth with bass , i'll try and sort it outamphibian wrote:eliottm - wrong tunetry this:
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As for your track...
it's lackinga lot of low-end, but otherwise I feel the whole tune is really, really nice. Love the upbeat, happy feeling. Beautiful work on the vocals as well! I feel the Intro I needs some work but what... I couldn't tell you. tbh I love your style - where you from?


Soundcloud
For all my other tunes, check out:
http://www.facebook.com/elliottmofficial
http://www.soundcloud.com/elliottm
http://www.youtube.com/elliottmmusic
For all my other tunes, check out:
http://www.facebook.com/elliottmofficial
http://www.soundcloud.com/elliottm
http://www.youtube.com/elliottmmusic
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cheers for the feedback, glad you like itJLproductions wrote:@Elliottm - Thanks for the feedback on BandwidthI really love the drums in 'drifting' they are so bouncy and energetic, nice work, cant fault anything in that one its genius! Maybe its just my speakers, but the drums sound a little quiet in 'Spring' compared to the bass...
Dissorganized
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For all my other tunes, check out:
http://www.facebook.com/elliottmofficial
http://www.soundcloud.com/elliottm
http://www.youtube.com/elliottmmusic
For all my other tunes, check out:
http://www.facebook.com/elliottmofficial
http://www.soundcloud.com/elliottm
http://www.youtube.com/elliottmmusic
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@Jlproductions
1.Bandwidth
Really like the vibes on that one,I really feel like it's top notch mate
2.Freq of nature
You really got a great idea there,only thing is I feel like it's lacking some subbass under that wobble,but other than that great work
@Elliotm
that drifting song is awesome,really liking the summer vibes,would love a 320!
@amphibian
as always your track is top notch nothing to say about it
Here's my latest one,would love feedback on it and also on the other track on my sig if anybody feels it!! thanks guys
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1.Bandwidth
Really like the vibes on that one,I really feel like it's top notch mate
2.Freq of nature
You really got a great idea there,only thing is I feel like it's lacking some subbass under that wobble,but other than that great work
@Elliotm
that drifting song is awesome,really liking the summer vibes,would love a 320!
@amphibian
as always your track is top notch nothing to say about it
Here's my latest one,would love feedback on it and also on the other track on my sig if anybody feels it!! thanks guys
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@ NRHc - the first track im reaally feelin i love the deeper side of dubstep! the sub bass is perfect, only thing id say turn up the snare, or layer it up so it gets more of a kick. second track is sick aswell nice subs again, wack some reverb on the snares make it roll more into each change, and yeah getting compared to DMZ is M.A.S.S.I.V.E!
This track is a clip...Through the Portal:
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@NHRC - duuuuuude. Deep is best!
only two things - snare, needs more weight. Seems very light and just disappears with that heavy bass (Good trick is to use the same kick, but eq out the bottom, so you only get the top-end of the kick), and on that note - the midrange part of the bass needs to be turned down ever so slightly. Love the intro, and the bell-like synth you got going. Beautiful sub action. My kind of producer. +1 follow
I haven't heard this on my system at home, but something tells me the sub is a tad too loud - because it powers through on crappy headphones 



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@jlprod -'through the portal'- Really liking the bass sound and the FX in this one. Percs are sounding a tad hot to me and maybe you could switch up the beat on the second drop?
@NHRc - Big track. Again, the bass sound is top notch like. I was thinking the snare sounded a bit weak in the first half of the first verse but in the second section it works great.
@ Elliottm - 'Spring' - Feeling the 90's vibes, big summery/hands-in-the-air bizniz. Mix is sounding solid, everythings got its place, nice work!
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@NHRc - Big track. Again, the bass sound is top notch like. I was thinking the snare sounded a bit weak in the first half of the first verse but in the second section it works great.
@ Elliottm - 'Spring' - Feeling the 90's vibes, big summery/hands-in-the-air bizniz. Mix is sounding solid, everythings got its place, nice work!
My current WIP
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amphibian wrote:@NHRC - duuuuuude. Deep is best!only two things - snare, needs more weight. Seems very light and just disappears with that heavy bass (Good trick is to use the same kick, but eq out the bottom, so you only get the top-end of the kick), and on that note - the midrange part of the bass needs to be turned down ever so slightly. Love the intro, and the bell-like synth you got going. Beautiful sub action. My kind of producer. +1 follow
I haven't heard this on my system at home, but something tells me the sub is a tad too loud - because it powers through on crappy headphones
Thanks guys!! Will keep working on the mix and keep you posted!JLproductions wrote:@ NRHc - the first track im reaally feelin i love the deeper side of dubstep! the sub bass is perfect, only thing id say turn up the snare, or layer it up so it gets more of a kick. second track is sick aswell nice subs again, wack some reverb on the snares make it roll more into each change, and yeah getting compared to DMZ is M.A.S.S.I.V.E!
@Reverend
love the crackles and the feel of this one,bouncy sub bass is really winner on that one,great job
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@Reverend
the crackles are dopeeeee
not much to criticize its sickkkkkkk!!!!!!
I could REALLLLLY use some feedback on this one , i think you will all like it.. i hope.
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the crackles are dopeeeee
not much to criticize its sickkkkkkk!!!!!!
I could REALLLLLY use some feedback on this one , i think you will all like it.. i hope.
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NRHc - Suuuubb... I love it. The melody fits nicely.. esp. at 2.45... Sounds great mate
Only thing I could say is maybe put more breaks in the sub, starts to get a bit too much near the end... but its up to taste/speaker config.
Reverend - I'm really feelin' the beat and percussion.. Sub is nice, I'm excited to see where it goes from there
JLProductions - The hats seem a bit loud compared to the snare, but they could mean to be that way. Also the stabs are a bit loud... The bass is siiick
Sorry just read the Soundcloud comments...
I love how the whole song build-ups up to the end. Overall the track could use some more mids, but I'm not sure what...
Wizeguy - Feelin the groove man
Love those subtle wobbles, they fit very nicely. The main synth could use a some more wet reverb... Interested to see where it goes..
amphibian - Epic creepy samples
Great atmosphere, perfect synth/reverb... Pretty much amazing
vv Just about finished with this ambient/downtempo 120 BPM... I was wondering how the mix sounds to you guys?
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Reverend - I'm really feelin' the beat and percussion.. Sub is nice, I'm excited to see where it goes from there

JLProductions - The hats seem a bit loud compared to the snare, but they could mean to be that way. Also the stabs are a bit loud... The bass is siiick


Wizeguy - Feelin the groove man


amphibian - Epic creepy samples


vv Just about finished with this ambient/downtempo 120 BPM... I was wondering how the mix sounds to you guys?
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@specimen - correct me if I'm wrong here mate - but you need to post 3 bits of feedback before you post a new wip. Rules are at the start of the thread.
@alexvont - not a fan of reverb'd kicks, I feel it just dirties up the percussion. I also think the kick doesn't really fit the tune. I think something deeper, with less top-end would be a better sample choice. I really like the pads, and the bass that comes in around 1.40 is awesome. Maybe a tad too much reverb though. hehe. Click sample is nice
@alexvont - not a fan of reverb'd kicks, I feel it just dirties up the percussion. I also think the kick doesn't really fit the tune. I think something deeper, with less top-end would be a better sample choice. I really like the pads, and the bass that comes in around 1.40 is awesome. Maybe a tad too much reverb though. hehe. Click sample is nice

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@jlprod -'through the portal'- the fx were dopee , and the bass was really mood setting for me.
@ Elliottm - 'Spring' - to me, it was mellow, i felt some old school in it.
@NHRc - Big track. yeah the snare was pree week, but im feeling the rest of the track man!!! sick work
this is the wip i have for you all to give me feedback on, this one is funnnnnn. and i can only immagine what im gonna do with it from here.
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sorry for not posting 3 before guys, im working off 4hours of sleep today, it really gets to ya later on in the evening. haha 
@ Elliottm - 'Spring' - to me, it was mellow, i felt some old school in it.
@NHRc - Big track. yeah the snare was pree week, but im feeling the rest of the track man!!! sick work
this is the wip i have for you all to give me feedback on, this one is funnnnnn. and i can only immagine what im gonna do with it from here.
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@specimen - all good, thanks
another dubstep remix of the obama speec already. hahahaha. Intro snare has too much reverb imo. Love the arpeggiated synth though. Drop is very dirty (in a bad way) too much reverb all over the place. Bass/synth could use a little more thickness.

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thank you very much for the feedbackamphibian wrote:@specimen - all good, thanksanother dubstep remix of the obama speec already. hahahaha. Intro snare has too much reverb imo. Love the arpeggiated synth though. Drop is very dirty (in a bad way) too much reverb all over the place. Bass/synth could use a little more thickness.
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Thanks man, I took your advice, tweaked a few eq's, and updated.. Sounds better nowamphibian wrote:@alexvont - not a fan of reverb'd kicks, I feel it just dirties up the percussion. I also think the kick doesn't really fit the tune. I think something deeper, with less top-end would be a better sample choice. I really like the pads, and the bass that comes in around 1.40 is awesome. Maybe a tad too much reverb though. hehe. Click sample is nice


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