grooki wrote:The Wiggle Baron wrote:Well, this is a tune I finished a first version of a few days ago. Im still in the middle of trying to polish it up a bit, make it all sound a bit cleaner...but unfortunately I am starting completely from scratch when it comes to the mixdown side of things, so absoloutely any input on that would be aaaamazing!
http://www.divshare.com/download/7011641-9c1
Im actually dead fucking happy with this tune! But had like 20 views and no replies in the dubs section
Would love to hear any feedback/criticism you guys might have!
Oh, and im going to have a browse through the last few pages on here later, drop some feedback. But for now...I should probably be doing what im procrastinating as we speak lol
hey Wiggle, listening to your track now

I love the start, great work on the low pads, and I like the muffled kicks with it in there too. And great percussion and drums too, I like the woody garage sound. The vocal is very well used too, and the understated bass is perfect. This works really well as an ambient track - I say ambient because it doesn't have anything made prominent, and also the structure is nebulous (in a good way). although it has just picked up, and I just realised the track goes for nine minutes! I would love a 320 of this if you are sending them out.
Also, I don't know if you already have, but check out VVV's tracks, fantastic atmospherics on a similar tip.
Cheers man! Nice one on the feedback! Appreciated. I do know what you mean about the lack of any part of the tune particularly sticking out at any point, and I am in the middle of trying to sort that. Was all finished a bit hurried to be honest! Got some brutal exams coming up, and should really be spending my time doing other things, but I got the bug with this tune, and just had to try and finish it off as soon as possible and get it out my system

Im trying to work a better version at the moment, got a big list of minor changes I want to have a play with, and im planning on cutting the amount of time before the first time the percussion comes in properly.
I was also thinking of making a kind of "vip" or whatever. Was thinking of glitching the percussion a bit, and adding a brutal snare. Then going to have a play with adding a bit of growl to the end of some of the long bass notes at points... Not going to be a quick ting though, just about to head down the library as we speak

Need more time in the day!
Oh yeah! And if you're after a 320, you should be able to download it from the link I put up before

Although I am trying to give it a better mixdown at the moment too...