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chilpillwill · Post by **chilpillwill** » Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:29 pm

this is an awesome section, i never even knew it existed before - i will upload some of my stuff soon

icemantfs · Post by **icemantfs** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:42 am

im new here and think ive posted a thread for this in the section lol but this is my first attempt at dubstep so would love some feedback.

www.myspace.com/icemanwtsmusic

@ deadly habit: how u been doin since the witness the sickness days?

thierry_le_dj · Post by **thierry_le_dj** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:56 pm

http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
(illusions) may i get a feed back plz...
am new around here
thanks.
http://www.myspace.com/thierryledj

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:10 pm

review someone else's tunes before askin' for feedback, please.

johnny brasco · Post by **johnny brasco** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:20 pm

ILTTI wrote:
ILTTI wrote:claude vonstroke - whos afraid of detroit (JSaxton Remix)

i wasnt sure whether this is to empty or not i want an opinion or two on what people think of the sounds

http://www.mediafire.com/?qzjnwzhw5wn
anyone?

I like the ambiance in the pad, but the track on whole is interesting enough for me to want me to listen right the way through.

The quality is good though.

Just checked your myspace, some heavy tracks on there.

rhek · Post by **rhek** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:29 pm

Dignan wrote:review someone else's tunes before askin' for feedback, please.

Lush pads, good sub mix but i reckon the drums should be a lot more up front. Really nice movement though. E tune.

Just started this last night.. bit worried it sounds a bit Benga-ish..

Lemme kno your thoughts, will comment back on tunes!

http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/columbo

Mixed really quiet so CRANK IT

.

(Check out Fodda too if you got time

)

icemantfs · Post by **icemantfs** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:58 pm

Thierry_Le_Dj wrote:http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj
(illusions) may i get a feed back plz...
am new around here
thanks.
http://www.myspace.com/thierryledj

Your tunes are alright man but sounds abit more like house to me personaly.

jsaxton · Post by **jsaxton** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:26 am

Rhek wrote:
Dignan wrote:review someone else's tunes before askin' for feedback, please.
Lush pads, good sub mix but i reckon the drums should be a lot more up front. Really nice movement though. E tune.

Just started this last night.. bit worried it sounds a bit Benga-ish..

Lemme kno your thoughts, will comment back on tunes!

http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/columbo

Mixed really quiet so CRANK IT .

(Check out Fodda too if you got time )

that is going to be a big track

i dont think you should worry about it sounding benga-ish because i dont hear it to much

other than the obvious comment to turn up the mixing id build it up more

so the drop is extra heavy, try using some dynamics and sweeps

but on a whole that sounds awesome!

keep it up

rhek · Post by **rhek** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:07 pm

@Iltti - Cheers dude! I am havin trouble gettin an intro drop down.. but im sure it'l come, just wanna finish it off.

Tried listening to ur tune but the file links invalid parantly..

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:09 pm

Rhek wrote:
Dignan wrote:review someone else's tunes before askin' for feedback, please.
Lush pads, good sub mix but i reckon the drums should be a lot more up front. Really nice movement though. E tune.

Just started this last night.. bit worried it sounds a bit Benga-ish..

Lemme kno your thoughts, will comment back on tunes!

http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/columbo

Mixed really quiet so CRANK IT .

(Check out Fodda too if you got time )

Sounds cool mate, I really like the impending doom vibe

I think the format filtered wobble is getting too repetitive though...

Damn, I really like Fodda2, only thing which is bugging me is the hihats, they're too loud and don't fit in the tune... but besides that, monster tune!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:14 pm

Here's some random stuff I made tonight after being really fucking pissed off due to a speeding ticket and a ignoring trafficlight ticket (250 euro!!!)

http://soundcloud.com/sinussawtooth/sin ... e-doodle-1

comments are apreciated, don't know if I'm going to finish it or not...

rhek · Post by **rhek** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:33 pm

roodbwoy wrote:
Rhek wrote:
Dignan wrote:review someone else's tunes before askin' for feedback, please.
Lush pads, good sub mix but i reckon the drums should be a lot more up front. Really nice movement though. E tune.

Just started this last night.. bit worried it sounds a bit Benga-ish..

Lemme kno your thoughts, will comment back on tunes!

http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/columbo

Mixed really quiet so CRANK IT .

(Check out Fodda too if you got time )
Sounds cool mate, I really like the impending doom vibe I think the format filtered wobble is getting too repetitive though...

Damn, I really like Fodda2, only thing which is bugging me is the hihats, they're too loud and don't fit in the tune... but besides that, monster tune!

Cheers dude! By the filtered wobble do you mean the first sort of high munchy wobble? like maybe break the pattern up a bit?

Yeh i need to sort fodda, i wasnt sure if there was enuf of a hook there.

You should def finish that tune off, its heavy and the midrange is proper thick sounding, maybe get some more movement on the arp filter-wise? Nice and aggy though hehe.

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:37 pm

Rhek wrote:
roodbwoy wrote:
Rhek wrote:
Dignan wrote:review someone else's tunes before askin' for feedback, please.
Lush pads, good sub mix but i reckon the drums should be a lot more up front. Really nice movement though. E tune.

Just started this last night.. bit worried it sounds a bit Benga-ish..

Lemme kno your thoughts, will comment back on tunes!

http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/columbo

Mixed really quiet so CRANK IT .

(Check out Fodda too if you got time )
Sounds cool mate, I really like the impending doom vibe I think the format filtered wobble is getting too repetitive though...

Damn, I really like Fodda2, only thing which is bugging me is the hihats, they're too loud and don't fit in the tune... but besides that, monster tune!
Cheers dude! By the filtered wobble do you mean the first sort of high munchy wobble? like maybe break the pattern up a bit?

Yeh i need to sort fodda, i wasnt sure if there was enuf of a hook there.

You should def finish that tune off, its heavy and the midrange is proper thick sounding, maybe get some more movement on the arp filter-wise?

yeah I mean the one with the formant filter, that goes yE E EE E E, hehe dunno how to explain it properly, it's the first wobble in your bar though...

thnx for checking out my track, gonna look for some proper movie samples to use in it

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:04 am

@ Roodbwoy - I'd make that intro longer, it's really good, really like all of this track really, cool background sounds, drums are pretty thumpy and that bass is nice

@ Rhek - Snare needs to be way louder in the mix, I can barely hear it but sounding cool overall

@ Thierry - Those are sounding cool, looking at the waveforms scare me though I haven't seen compression like that since death magnetic album by metallica, may wanna ease off a bit

@ Iceman - Mix is soundin nice and solid, can't fault it nice one

http://www.zshare.net/audio/623804943389d68c/

This is a new one I'm working on, I was hoping someboday could check it through a sub and tell me if it will carry enough weight for a club sound system?

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:59 pm

@ Lowpass-I will listen to your new tune in a few and feedback from my tele. I'm getting booted out of the coffee shop!:lol:

just posted a rough start to a new one-Brand New Afternoon on the soundcloud

http://soundcloud.com/lhd
feedback if you can. I will listen to and feedback on some more tunes later.

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:26 pm

Lowpass - I loved the mood you set with the subbass, really awesome flow and imo you're doing a great job so far.

LHD - It's basic, the idea is good now just work it out more, perhaps boost your subbass abit , it was kind of low for me..

This is a song I worked on 2 weeks ago that I picked up now again, tell me what you think

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/253644

devium · Post by **devium** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 1:19 am

http://soundcloud.com/devium/dubstep-10

My first serious go at a dubstep tune (or any real tune for that matter). Looking for any and all feedback. Much appreciated.

aggradefsys · Post by **aggradefsys** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:00 am

Sifres wrote:I AM MAD AT THE INTERNET

Hahahahaha, nah, just decided I didn't want to put that out even partially yet since I'm revamping it with a whole different program. And yeah I can't believe that's still there, either mods here don't give a fuck or are real slack. Sensitive much?

lowpass · Post by **lowpass** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:27 am

Reignz wrote:Lowpass - I loved the mood you set with the subbass, really awesome flow and imo you're doing a great job so far.

This is a song I worked on 2 weeks ago that I picked up now again, tell me what you think

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/253644

Cheers, is there anything else you'd advise? the sub loud enough in the mix?

Checked yours out, didn't know newgrounds uploaded music let alone with badger badger as the background, best mascot for dubstep if eve I saw one. It's sounding cool, atmospheric build up some heavy bass, really dark

lhd · Post by **lhd** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 5:45 pm

@Devium-Nice tune, little bit more eq needed for sure though, your kick seems to be hitting where your sub should be and your bass is all mid. Try eq'ing your kick with a spike at 80hz and a spike at 125hz with a hard low cut under 80hz. Boost your bass hard under 70hz and all they way down to 35hz if you need to double your bass line to keep the mid and your cpu can handle then go ahead and double the bass track, add a lowpass filter to your low end with a cutoff at 75hz to avoid signal clash. All in all tune sounding good. Big up!

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