@skerpaderp - loving the sample at the beginning, however drums at the drop are a little stagnant in my opinion, playing the same 2 bar loops over and over gets a little dull with no switch ups/syncopation. mixing is pretty good, snare could use some more oomph, seems a little small and kinda pathetic give it some slap! also where are your hi-hats!!!!!???/ This tune needs some lovin, you probably were going to change some of this already as it is a wip but that but there is my critique for ya!
@Bradicle - to be honest this isn't really my style of song but heres my two cents. Cool drums, and the whole tune is pretty well mixed although the piano may be a bit loud in my opinion. I think the melody has enough variation that it doesn't get boring for me at least. I think the one thing it could use is a break from the piano for the love of god though cus it plays constantly for the entire song, which does get monotonous. Really like your snare noise has that dope echo im always looking for! some more love to this tune and it could be pretty good.
@Jayzor - omg worms samples!!!! you rock! good mixdown, nothing blaringly wrong maybe the hats could be a little louder. great sound play in here though. Wonky vibes, not much to critique other than that because it isn't done but I think you have a good start. Once again though not really my style of tune, I like my music dark and groovy.
@gnarbage - This track needs a lot of work to clear up the mud. Your kick and snare are pretty lost in the mix, they need to have more room in the mix than the midrange and some equing and filtering to divide the frequencies so that they will not conflict with each other so much. Also you bass noises need some extra widening, they are kind of flat and do not sit in the mix super well. This will need a lot of work to sound clean, but I can tell you are probably fairly new. Anyway composition wise I would say that I do like the shuffle in your hihats, that is something I struggle to peg sometimes. some good variation overall and certainly does not leave one bored. Give this track the time it needs and fix that mud! Unfortuantely the mixdown is an art that can only be learned through practice and reading, but you will get it eventually!
Here is a track I made tonight in 2 hours or so to see how fast I could make a very minimal composition but have enough variation to keep it from getting boring, Im intending to use it as a kind of sub-woofer test right now. Its got some weird vibes but I hope you enjoy!
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That mid range wobble get's tiresome and harsh, i was listening and expected it to change to a different sound (with the same melody) but it just went on. Kick has no low end...but i like the dubby drums rythmn...i'd be using a cheap sounding spring reverb on the snare with a rythmn like that. 
It's probably going to be the last time I use this because like 95% of the time I end up wasting time. Fuck so annoying, why can't 
