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resktwo · Post by **resktwo** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 8:45 pm

thanks for the respone! hmm ill take the quirky thing as a good thing haha
maybe the beat problem is caused by my poor mixing skills.. ill work on it
ill listen to yours when i come back home

electromghxcstep · Post by **electromghxcstep** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 9:02 pm

Hey thanks for the feedback, duno which intro arpeggio you mean but one at the very beginin is skream not me ha duno how well you know the original.

Likin your track its a niice slow build maybe gets a bit too repetitive but that kinda works, helps it stay nice an dark. Really like the sample, maybe better louder so you can easily hear what it says? Tbh its not really my style, but as a techy soundin zoney kinda track its sik thanks for that.

dedman · Post by **dedman** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 9:48 pm

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59089151afec50dc/

changed it up quite alot now:) what you think?

the wiggle baron · Post by **the wiggle baron** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 10:10 pm

Will be on another browse through some tunes in a little while y'alls. But I just wanted to whack up an updated version of the tune I put up here before! Thanks to you's feedback, I decided the tune definitely needed a good pruning, and I think ive taken the track down to something alot more listen friendly. Had to grin and bear it, as I swear down it just doesnt...look right when a tune isn't slowly progressing over the course of ten minutes, but I think it keeps the interest alot better now the same elements are condensed into 6 mins instead of 9.

Would love any feedback regarding the arrangement/composition of this one, as its what I had the most trouble getting right. Also played around a bit with the bass on the 2nd/3rd "drop" to help keep it going a bit, and would love to hear what people think. Im not big on the stonking 2nd drops to be honest, just like to keep mixing it up.

Anyhoo, shes hyar!
http://www.divshare.com/download/7182098-ea2

Swear this is where the best tunes live

edit: Now I listen to it, I think im going to play around with the tune later on a bit more actually. Might bring some growl into the bassline once it gets a bit portamento'd...but again, it might have to wait till after some exams!

haxx · Post by **haxx** » Fri Apr 24, 2009 4:32 pm

TEQH wrote:
Jolly Wailer wrote:here's one you lot can have...

http://www.divshare.com/download/5532787-965
Big tune as well! Goin on the Ipod

thats sick, love the samplin'

altered state · Post by **altered state** » Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:09 pm

Eops wrote:
@Altered State - Even Flow
I actually really like this - its odd and dark but not in the usual way. Be nice to hear a few more sfx/echos floating about on a longer version - just slipped into the Turkey song that sir is an inspired sample well done!

Nice one, cheers man!

The longer version does evolve slightly but im still tweaking it before i say its finished tottaly, mainly the intro - sounds well cheese atm.

Cheers for the feedback tho!

peace

dedman · Post by **dedman** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 11:57 am

http://www.zshare.net/audio/59213842d65badef/

been working on this one all weekend! any feedback on how its sounding please guys!

r · Post by r » Sun Apr 26, 2009 12:03 pm

less reverb would help lots

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 1:26 pm

http://www.myspace.com/legend4ryrhythms

Darkest Sunset / Polluted City

Will post feedback for the next 3 who post - since most other tunes above this post have gotten feedback or a few days old.

plainface · Post by **plainface** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:36 pm

new beat up on myspace

it's the top one in the player btw

any feedback at all ?

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:44 pm

The Wiggle Baron wrote:Will be on another browse through some tunes in a little while y'alls. But I just wanted to whack up an updated version of the tune I put up here before! Thanks to you's feedback, I decided the tune definitely needed a good pruning, and I think ive taken the track down to something alot more listen friendly. Had to grin and bear it, as I swear down it just doesnt...look right when a tune isn't slowly progressing over the course of ten minutes, but I think it keeps the interest alot better now the same elements are condensed into 6 mins instead of 9.

Would love any feedback regarding the arrangement/composition of this one, as its what I had the most trouble getting right. Also played around a bit with the bass on the 2nd/3rd "drop" to help keep it going a bit, and would love to hear what people think. Im not big on the stonking 2nd drops to be honest, just like to keep mixing it up.

Anyhoo, shes hyar!
http://www.divshare.com/download/7182098-ea2

Swear this is where the best tunes live

edit: Now I listen to it, I think im going to play around with the tune later on a bit more actually. Might bring some growl into the bassline once it gets a bit portamento'd...but again, it might have to wait till after some exams!

i'm feeling. Subtle, which i like!
I like when that weird voice comes swurrel up (does that makes sense?)
anyways good track.

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:48 pm

Depone wrote:
TEQH wrote:
Jolly Wailer wrote:here's one you lot can have...

http://www.divshare.com/download/5532787-965
Big tune as well! Goin on the Ipod
Yeah! nice...

Heres a new one for yous!

http://soundcloud.com/depone/depone-frogger-dj-promo

Wonky as funk!

waaah nice!
nobody like's tha record's that you play!
WTF is rong wid ma mix

Love it man!

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:52 pm

dedman wrote:http://www.zshare.net/audio/59213842d65badef/

been working on this one all weekend! any feedback on how its sounding please guys!

Cool wobble automation, and overall noice track!

do you use the wobble from on your synth or do you make them in the sequencer?

@Legend4ry: nice deep and spotless sounds! i like them.
only one thing: the snare in Polluted City keeps distracting me :p

@Plainface: where's the myspace link?

@ everybody, c'mon ppl give eachother more feedback! You know how unhappy it make's you feel when you get no feedback.

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:02 pm

Koch556 wrote:Hey guys - looking for feedback on some tracks - they are the top three in the myspace player:

- Chester Drop
- Iron Fist
- New Western

Any thoughts would be great!

556

Chester Drop and Iron Fist are both very nice deep ones.
New Western is simply genious! (slime, slime.. 320?

)

2manynoobs · Post by **2manynoobs** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 7:18 pm

Track i worked on titled "Them Stole My Bike"
The title says it: last thursday they stole my beloved bike, you can read me whine about it in the secret ninja hideout.

Last few days were really shitty for me. Now it's goin better.
I strike back with this Tune!

http://soundcloud.com/2manynoobs/them-stole-my-bike

feedback would be kickass

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 7:39 pm

2ManyNoobs wrote:Track i worked on titled "Them Stole My Bike"
The title says it: last thursday they stole my beloved bike, you can read me whine about it in the secret ninja hideout.

Last few days were really shitty for me. Now it's goin better.
I strike back with this Tune!

http://soundcloud.com/2manynoobs/them-stole-my-bike

feedback would be kickass

Listening now..

As I listen..You said

@Legend4ry: nice deep and spotless sounds! i like them.
only one thing: the snare in Polluted City keeps distracting me :p

Distracting how?

Anyways to your tune.

The intro was very good, got my hopes of deep, dark moving track so hearing wobbles instead of deep sub bass and not hearing that melody more was very disappointing. But its your track and the way you take it is up to you..

On the actually track, the drums are great - very good groove and the melody is great (in the intro/breakdown) the wobble is good sound, take the distortion/compression down a bit though, its sounds like its clipping to the extreme! apart from that, sure if you're into this thing it'll be a big tune, its a bit soulless for me though, just opinion not a badly produced track though, far from it! Just not my personal direction

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