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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Thu May 06, 2010 2:21 pm

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added a vox and removed the end solo shit

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Thu May 06, 2010 2:26 pm

tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud

added a vox and removed the end solo shit

Yeah im feelin this

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by legend4ry » Thu May 06, 2010 4:57 pm

soundcloud isn't playing fo' me, so will edit post when it is.

Either way

Some thoughts on this would be nice.

Don't worry, I give feedback to anyone who gives me any - so don't hesitate to tell me any loves or especially hates of the track!

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Soulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by globalbabylon » Thu May 06, 2010 6:33 pm

@ironik - Nice bass, dirty. Like the hats shuffle, would like to here some more filtering/delay/automation on the mids durring the breakdown.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Thu May 06, 2010 6:35 pm

legend4ry wrote:soundcloud isn't playing fo' me, so will edit post when it is.

Either way

Some thoughts on this would be nice.

Don't worry, I give feedback to anyone who gives me any - so don't hesitate to tell me any loves or especially hates of the track!

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daym this is a catchy tune im really feeling this one and a great bassline to pack too! nice work as always leg

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Thu May 06, 2010 7:31 pm

New Tune for feedback

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by jaspervc » Thu May 06, 2010 7:35 pm

@Craggle: Damn hard track :p i like it, a lot! i hear some Machine gun (16 bit remix) influences ;) Keep up!
@legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Thu May 06, 2010 7:40 pm

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by Craggle » Thu May 06, 2010 9:12 pm

IntrudaB2BAngel wrote:Soundcloud
I really enjoyed this track ! well done, one thing i would add is maybe a sun underneath the initial wobble, just to give it that extra punch, another thing i would do is maybe give the kick and the snare a bit more punch as well, as it feels a little soft where as it needs to be a bit harder, otherwise awesome track !
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by legend4ry » Thu May 06, 2010 9:14 pm

jaspervc wrote: @legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?
Don't mean to sound like a prick but heavier? Its peaking at 55hz - thats pretty damn heavy to me..
Soulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by jaspervc » Thu May 06, 2010 10:25 pm

legend4ry wrote:
jaspervc wrote: @legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?
Don't mean to sound like a prick but heavier? Its peaking at 55hz - thats pretty damn heavy to me..
No, i don't that kind of heavy.. I mean like more distorded-heavier sound. Sorry 4 that

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Fri May 07, 2010 9:26 am

Tracks for feedback

@legend4ry- 1st Track - dah-un-wip .

Great intro smooth throughout, try addin some double snares like a bounce back on 4th bars.
Very relaxing tune !

2nd Track - along-the-conciousness-final.

Intresting intro, gets you ready. standared build up and streight up with the tune lovin it! ..
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@jaspervc- djvc-candy-string-2nd-version

Wkd sounds bro use the rest of the keybored!!! get some melodies goin to send shivers up spinezz!
Still a phat tune tho :D :D :D


On that note here is another tune loaded..... Cheers peeps.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Fri May 07, 2010 9:31 am

Tracks For Feedback

@Sinisterbeats Track 1 ) lots of potential i suggest experiment with what u got. build up the beat in the beggining,
get some differnt flows in the middle of the tune maybe another drop....?
GOOD STUFF THOUGH!!!!!!!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by jaspervc » Fri May 07, 2010 10:45 am

@Sinisterbeats: Damn nice drums.. This could be one huge track! Nice work

@IntrudaB2BAngel: Nice tune u have, i like 2:47.. Maybe add some more of those effects ;)
And thanks m8, I tried to put a little variation in the song ;)
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And here is another track from me.. Some drumstep ^^
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by Sinisterbeats » Fri May 07, 2010 11:37 am

@tripwire22:
LOVE the pads! Could maybe bring the sub up a bit. Love the second section, really warm sounding bass. Not to keen on the snare sample but I guess it fits the tune.

@legend4ry:
Really nice tune, great drum samples. Love the vocals. Maybe increase the decay on the sub a bit to fill it out. Apart from that really nice chilled tune.

@IntrudaB2BAngel:
Some really good lfo work, like your bass patches. Good drum beat but need bringing out in the mix more. Also add some more depth with some reverb. Sounds very mono aswell at the moment, maybe widen out your mid bass a bit or add some subtle pads.

@jaspervc:
1st tune- Like the drums, maybe alternate between another hat sample along with the one your using to get them rolling more. Also your sub good do with moving down an octave to give it more punch.

2nd tune- Dont really listen/like drumstep but this is pretty sick. Again with the hats try using more than one sample or velocity changes. Snare seems a bit quite.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by ENZA » Fri May 07, 2010 12:17 pm

Just an intro i made up tonight lemme have some feedback!! thanks!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

Post by Sinisterbeats » Fri May 07, 2010 1:15 pm

ENZA wrote:Just an intro i made up tonight lemme have some feedback!! thanks!

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Sounds promising, low end is a bit muddy. You probably need to post more than just an intro to get any proper feedback though.

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