DSF Rap Battle VOTING NOW!!

[jrisreal]

i read the rules again and you said that the first thing it is supposed to be based on is the cleverness/funniness of the lyrics. What if I don't make clever/funny lyrics but more of serious type stuff? A bit like some of eminems stuff?

[AfterEmpire]

You son of a bitch. You went there. Right into fuckin T-Pain, Lil Wayne, Kanye, Rhianna, Cold Flamez, Usher and everybody else land.



I am Disgusted.

[jrisreal]

You son of a bitch. You went there. Right into fuckin T-Pain, Lil Wayne, Kanye, Rhianna, Cold Flamez, Usher and everybody else land.



I am Disgusted.

who me?

[-[2]DAY_-]

i read the rules again and you said that the first thing it is supposed to be based on is the cleverness/funniness of the lyrics. What if I don't make clever/funny lyrics but more of serious type stuff? A bit like some of eminems stuff?

then work on your punchlines and stop shouting about how your bitch wronged you and you're gonna slit her throat for it

[jrisreal]

i read the rules again and you said that the first thing it is supposed to be based on is the cleverness/funniness of the lyrics. What if I don't make clever/funny lyrics but more of serious type stuff? A bit like some of eminems stuff?

then work on your punchlines and stop shouting about how your bitch wronged you and you're gonna slit her throat for it

lol not that crap I mean like the When I'm Gone type of stuff...the emotional rap and with some influence from Krayzie Bone, Trip Lee, and Tedashii

[AfterEmpire]

Naw Dude, not you, that was directed at Mister Habit.

[jrisreal]

Naw Dude, not you, that was directed at Mister Habit.

oh lol. i assumed

[-[2]DAY_-]

y'kno when u assume u just make an Ass of U n Me
:p

on a side note, wtf happened to em these days. I miss the crazy MM LP style shit
relapse, recovery, rehab, whatever the fuck all suck imo

[Siderealdb]

i read the rules again and you said that the first thing it is supposed to be based on is the cleverness/funniness of the lyrics. What if I don't make clever/funny lyrics but more of serious type stuff? A bit like some of eminems stuff?

then work on your punchlines and stop shouting about how your bitch wronged you and you're gonna slit her throat for it

lol not that crap I mean like the When I'm Gone type of stuff...the emotional rap and with some influence from Krayzie Bone, Trip Lee, and Tedashii

So you basically want to preach.

[ChadDub]

You guys are so silly for not already realizing I've won.

http://soundcloud.com/chad-kirk/rap-is- ... n-official

[hutyluty]

request for all accapellas to be made available as a community resource

[-[2]DAY_-]

i just want to learn to properly toast
but i don't think i'd ever get there without actually doing live MCing for years with some mainstay talent or venue
Maybe its just something you've got or don't. :\


writing rap comes natural for me but the type of here/now social aspects of jazzing up a crowd and helping them connect with the music
that's genius

[jrisreal]

i read the rules again and you said that the first thing it is supposed to be based on is the cleverness/funniness of the lyrics. What if I don't make clever/funny lyrics but more of serious type stuff? A bit like some of eminems stuff?

then work on your punchlines and stop shouting about how your bitch wronged you and you're gonna slit her throat for it

lol not that crap I mean like the When I'm Gone type of stuff...the emotional rap and with some influence from Krayzie Bone, Trip Lee, and Tedashii

So you basically want to preach.

sometimes...im talkin bout the flow of it and how its not really the funny/clever type of rap

[AfterEmpire]

If it doesnt have some sort of appeal to almost everyone involved in listening, then your not gonna get too many ppl to listen for very long. And the ones who HAVE listened are definitely not gonna tell their friends about it. I think its all kinda like a game like politicians play, not so much saying what you want to say entirely, but doing it in a way where you still speak your mind but appeal to the masses.

[paravrais]

i read the rules again and you said that the first thing it is supposed to be based on is the cleverness/funniness of the lyrics. What if I don't make clever/funny lyrics but more of serious type stuff? A bit like some of eminems stuff?

I didn't mean clever AND funny (though both together = ultimate win) but if your lyrics aint either then I'm afraid they are whack. Of course you can do serious stuff if you want but if your just rhyming bait words with no substance in any of your bars then you aint gonna get rated highly.

For what it's worth, sure Eminems new music may be dry as fuck but the stuff your referring to is damn clever wordsmithery. The boy has talent, I even saw a recent freestyle he did that was dope, god knows why his album stuff has turned to shit.

Lets just remind ourselves of what 'serious' clever rap sounds like;



And the funny stuff...



It don't matter what style you come with as long as you've got bars heavier than a lead elephant.

EDIT: and to whoever asked, hell yeah I'm entering this too!!

[jrisreal]

so far so good, whabbout you guys?

[paravrais]

Got halfway through making a beat then scrapped it and started again. Not even thought about the lyrics yet but I'm definitely gonna have to call someone out...

[Ryman222]

Count me in

[Fused Productions]

so far so good, whabbout you guys?

Was making a hiphop beat, but sounded dull so I said fuck it, I'll make a drumstep track instead
Almost done with the beat now

[-[2]DAY_-]

I'm just about ready with my bits, see if i can submit the thing properly though lol