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darkmatteruk
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Post by darkmatteruk » Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:54 am

yea im pretty pleased with it so far, stil needs a fair bit of work though

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Post by jbird22 » Thu Jan 08, 2009 4:35 pm

Some feedback for some peps.

Smartface - beepdubs. Cool tune, wobbly bass is a good addition to the track. But me thinks that a wobbly drop is needed?
Also the beep noise u have on it has like a high range click on it ? just an observation. Not sure if its a bad thing.

Rendr- Trackie. Tight production mate, lots of nice ambiance goin on. Keep up the good work bro.

DarkmatterUK- Only when u Sleep. Nice tack, can get a little repetitive after a while (just being honest). That's what dance music is about I guess. Caged State is an "F" ing sweet tune though

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Post by darkmatteruk » Thu Jan 08, 2009 7:42 pm

jbird22 wrote:Some feedback for some peps.

DarkmatterUK- Only when u Sleep. Nice tack, can get a little repetitive after a while (just being honest). That's what dance music is about I guess. Caged State is an "F" ing sweet tune though
thanks man, i know the pattern on the bass stays the same, but there are very subtle but effective changes throughout in Only When You Sleep, such as filter work etc. the second drop has a couple of breaks layered and just purely lurking in the background, may be a little hard to detect them on virb

still a WIP though, and mos def needs some switching up on the main kick and snare

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Post by roistermusic » Thu Jan 08, 2009 7:48 pm

two unfinished tunes on the myspace


down low - chilled vibe/dubby

digi - wobble party tune

need any advice possible on sounds, style, arrangment

not mixd down yet and only bouncd striaght out of reason

cheers

www.myspace.com/roistermusic

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Post by deadly_habit » Thu Jan 08, 2009 8:35 pm

and this thread has helped bring over loads of people from the dub section who don't usually post over here :roll:

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Post by duskky » Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:17 pm

Lienne wrote:http://www.divshare.com/download/6269153-8bf


I think its nearly done i'm pretty happy with it.

My 2nd go at dubstep :)

sounds pretty good. especially for a 2nd attempt :D i would say that sometimes your drums are a little dull sounding (by which i mean that they lack a little high end snap), and the bass that comes in at about 4.13 is a little too high in the mix. I really like the drop at about 55secs - has a really nice kode9-esq sludge to it.


here's a tune i've been working on since last night:

http://www.divshare.com/download/6271559-ec5

:D

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Post by stansar » Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:29 pm

safe safe all!!

med dis new tune, posted it up, got fuck all feedback wise!

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?t=72076

all feedback appreciated, any1? someone?

ahah love ya,
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Post by michaelvman » Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:25 pm

bEErz wrote:
smartface wrote:out to the feedbackers - here is my semi final edit - now with improved deep wobbly bass and compressed beeps.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53823611939e1fea/
bass sounds heavey one this 1, but u need to eq that mid bass cos its compressing ur hats, sound like a bit more eqing on that bass and try n get not a one note basssline.
dont listen to to that beer shit he doesnt know what hes sayin :D

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Post by teqh » Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:43 pm

got a free 320 of ghost riddim here

http://rapidshare.com/files/181361932/G ... 1.mp3.html

some serious tracks are gettin posted up :lol:

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Post by beerz » Fri Jan 09, 2009 8:40 pm

michaelvman wrote:
bEErz wrote:
smartface wrote:out to the feedbackers - here is my semi final edit - now with improved deep wobbly bass and compressed beeps.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53823611939e1fea/
bass sounds heavey one this 1, but u need to eq that mid bass cos its compressing ur hats, sound like a bit more eqing on that bass and try n get not a one note basssline.
dont listen to to that beer shit he doesnt know what hes sayin :D
slam ur dubz up then u dreadlock......c wag1 then :twisted:

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Post by pieceofshh... » Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:32 am

Jolly Wailer wrote:yeah sometimes its all about the right person hearing the right tune at the right time.
every time is about that mate. ;)

HERE's the place for my tunes. brand new one is called Radio Boom Boom. didn't get much love at Dubs section, but i believe the reason for this is not because my tunes are bad (i think they rock! ;)), it's because i don't post 320's.
so, hope someone in here will give them a proper listen.
cheers mates,
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Post by michaelvman » Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:59 pm

bEErz wrote:
michaelvman wrote:
bEErz wrote:
smartface wrote:out to the feedbackers - here is my semi final edit - now with improved deep wobbly bass and compressed beeps.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53823611939e1fea/
bass sounds heavey one this 1, but u need to eq that mid bass cos its compressing ur hats, sound like a bit more eqing on that bass and try n get not a one note basssline.
dont listen to to that beer shit he doesnt know what hes sayin :D
slam ur dubz up then u dreadlock......c wag1 then :twisted:
i wouldnt want to embarrass u

also whats ur AIM again?

n r u gona have ur cdjs at home when u come back for ape?

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Post by beerz » Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:21 pm

michaelvman wrote:
bEErz wrote:
michaelvman wrote:
bEErz wrote:
smartface wrote:out to the feedbackers - here is my semi final edit - now with improved deep wobbly bass and compressed beeps.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53823611939e1fea/
bass sounds heavey one this 1, but u need to eq that mid bass cos its compressing ur hats, sound like a bit more eqing on that bass and try n get not a one note basssline.
dont listen to to that beer shit he doesnt know what hes sayin :D
slam ur dubz up then u dreadlock......c wag1 then :twisted:
i wouldnt want to embarrass u

also whats ur AIM again?

n r u gona have ur cdjs at home when u come back for ape?
ooh erm i dont think so, i cud leave them i guess n bring them back that weekend. i can play with my funky fresh technics in the mean time.
n my aim is "manchesterbeer" u recordin set mix btw?

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Post by frizzwah » Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:28 pm

new track on the myspace called dystopia.

www.myspace.com/erebusdub

any feedback/criticism would be appreciated.

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Post by DeafMan » Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:56 pm

frizzwah i like the groove in dystopia but im not sure about the snare in it, i find its a bit much and maybe a bit too often. i like the way that the bass changes regularly and sorta keeps me on my toes when im listening.



Just found this thread and yeah i agree that theres not much love on the forum. I post up tunes and you can see people have been listening on the virb, then I bump it to try to get people to listen but still get no feedback and i dunno whether to take a hint that my tunes are crap and arnt worth a listen or if it might just be people are too lazy to give feedback.

Anyway rant over I'd jsut apprecite it if anyone would have a listen to the tunes on my virb >>> http://virb.com/2649372446692430

In particular the regurgitate tune and any feedback would be nice hahaha

Cheers.

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Post by legend4ry » Sun Jan 11, 2009 3:38 pm

http://www.divshare.com/download/6296198-bea

Something me & Lienne have been working on - juust needs a few mix down changes and that decay on the snare and then I think we got ourselfs a tune :)


What ya think?
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Post by DeafMan » Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:04 pm

Legendary, I like the warp on that wobble that breaks it up a bit its nice. The glitchy drums are nice too but i dunno i think i would add some more drum layers or variations of some of them. The way the beat goes 4x4 towards the end is nice too.

Have a listen to some of my tunes if you get the chance> http://virb.com/2649372446692430

Cheers.

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Post by subindex » Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:46 pm

heres a 320 link to a nutune i finished last week
http://www.sendspace.com/file/if9fpl
its named AvsomeMore

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