Liked it, the synth work isnt particularly dubstep, but with the 2step drums still it sounds really good, would be an awesome one to hear half way through a set... wouldnt mind a 320 if you've got one?
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Alright dudes
I'm a bit of a noobie at this but some feedback on a track i'm working on at the moment would be great
http://virb.com/piggy
Shapo is the tune =)
cheers dudes
I'm a bit of a noobie at this but some feedback on a track i'm working on at the moment would be great
http://virb.com/piggy
Shapo is the tune =)
cheers dudes
Last edited by piggyuk on Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:29 am, edited 1 time in total.
Well the track would be pretty much nothing without the tune (?) so I'll try to make it less aggresive/annoying or just go for something different.soupdogg wrote:Ditch the chiptune shit it gave me a headache, tighten up the drums, make them crisper, sharper. the bassline sounds like it was meant for a completely different track, and is very flat.Koo wrote:http://soundcloud.com/kooma/speed-2
Bash it, would be nice to know what's good place to start improving.
I'll try to do something with the bassline too, I had feeling it ain't fitting in too. Is the drum pattern itself any good?
The chiptune feel made me feel like it was gonna drop into like a Gabba tune, the drum pattern is ok, maybe you could change it up a little bit more though at some point.Koo wrote:Well the track would be pretty much nothing without the tune (?) so I'll try to make it less aggresive/annoying or just go for something different.soupdogg wrote:Ditch the chiptune shit it gave me a headache, tighten up the drums, make them crisper, sharper. the bassline sounds like it was meant for a completely different track, and is very flat.Koo wrote:http://soundcloud.com/kooma/speed-2
Bash it, would be nice to know what's good place to start improving.
I'll try to do something with the bassline too, I had feeling it ain't fitting in too. Is the drum pattern itself any good?
id just be a bit more sparing with the chiptune, instead of having it constantly blaring.
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It aint finished and the kick drum is kinda shit. But crits?
It aint finished and the kick drum is kinda shit. But crits?
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Yep kick drum is shit :psoupdogg wrote:http://soundcloud.com/soupdog/neolythik-times-2
It aint finished and the kick drum is kinda shit. But crits?
The song sounds good, my only suggestion is to speeden up your drums abit at 1:08 when your lead kicks in, maybe don't speed them up but add some high hats/percussion to give it more, cause now the tune's abit boring even though it's good.
Song made while following a Cubase instruction course, but now I'm stuck as I only have Cubase 4 LE at home and this is made in Cubase 5, so I guess it won't be finished until I got myself a copy of Cubase 5..
I noticed that on some stereo's people can't seem to hear the sub very clearly, that will need fixing aswell I guess
http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/9/12/ ... 0depot.mp3
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... song-remix
Here's a tune I've been working on for a bit, not sure of the arrangement, but hopefully you guys can tell me what you think.
Here's a tune I've been working on for a bit, not sure of the arrangement, but hopefully you guys can tell me what you think.
any chance anyone can give me Feedback on this tune?
called 'Air Raid'.
http://www.mediafire.com/?uynhwedilzz

called 'Air Raid'.
http://www.mediafire.com/?uynhwedilzz

i listened to this a couple of times n kinda like it.IanFM wrote:http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/abs ... song-remix
Here's a tune I've been working on for a bit, not sure of the arrangement, but hopefully you guys can tell me what you think.
all the synth string / atmospheric kinda backing sounds sound cool, best part of the song easy.
i thing the drums lack slight punch but that could be taste. i.e. i like a fatter snare, but is it more garagey, so hey.
i think the bass is good but maybe needs to be more prominent in the arrangement. i.e. on a drop or sumthin.
regardin the arrangement, i like the change @ 2.30, a nice change.
also just out of interest, u got a link to the original?
hope i helped

Ok, I like the basis of it. The bass floats in just right, not really my type of tune most of the time, but it certainly has its place. One thing I'd do is give the siren dynamics. Right now the siren just stays constant through out the entire song, I like it raising tension in the intro, but once the drop comes turning down or spacing out the siren would help focus attention on the drop/vibe. Secondly, I'm not sure how intentional this is, but the delay on the vocals could be a bit better. Right now the 'wet' delay hits right at 100% the same volume as the sample, even turning that down a bit would make it clearer (though not too clear) and disturb the ears (at least mine) less. Just gotta give the tune a bit more up & down, and you've got something on your hands.this Kid named Lamont wrote:any chance anyone can give me Feedback on this tune?
called 'Air Raid'.
http://www.mediafire.com/?uynhwedilzz
Polyrhythms, minor notes and casette resampling!
http://www.zshare.net/audio/629108235d057bc8/
I'm sick of long intros. If you couldn't tell.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/629108235d057bc8/
I'm sick of long intros. If you couldn't tell.
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Been working on this track on and off and ive hit a bit of a road block at the moment.
Want to see what people like about it so I get a bit of an idea where its going
http://soundcloud.com/cataphract/hollis
Want to see what people like about it so I get a bit of an idea where its going

http://soundcloud.com/cataphract/hollis
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hey cheers for feedback man.IanFM wrote:Ok, I like the basis of it. The bass floats in just right, not really my type of tune most of the time, but it certainly has its place. One thing I'd do is give the siren dynamics. Right now the siren just stays constant through out the entire song, I like it raising tension in the intro, but once the drop comes turning down or spacing out the siren would help focus attention on the drop/vibe. Secondly, I'm not sure how intentional this is, but the delay on the vocals could be a bit better. Right now the 'wet' delay hits right at 100% the same volume as the sample, even turning that down a bit would make it clearer (though not too clear) and disturb the ears (at least mine) less. Just gotta give the tune a bit more up & down, and you've got something on your hands.this Kid named Lamont wrote:any chance anyone can give me Feedback on this tune?
called 'Air Raid'.
http://www.mediafire.com/?uynhwedilzz
definately understand what you mean, gonna give it another go.
alot of the problems come down to the fact i use Live 6 Lite

@ Ian fm-Definitely feeling the vibe of this one man, my advice, some better drum fills, beef up the bass A LOT, add some more reverb to the whole thing, also you could really make those hi hats dance a bit better, the pattern is so repetitive. A little more space and bass to add some movement to the overall track. Remember space, pace, and bass. I love this tune though, big big up yaself for being so creative and original, time to put in some work on the sound design and eq front. pm me if you need some easy to understand eq stuff and I'll email a list to ya


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Just put up a new version of this preview to tune
Good Feelins
http://soundcloud.com/lhd
more feedback on the way, I cannot feedback on anything that I have to download cuz my modem is slow as hell at the crib. big love.
Good Feelins
http://soundcloud.com/lhd
more feedback on the way, I cannot feedback on anything that I have to download cuz my modem is slow as hell at the crib. big love.
Giving this a bump as I am not at home and trying to think where to take it while away. Thoughts?
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