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Get This MonsterDub TRACK Before ItS gONE

Post by rollzroyze » Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:42 pm

Get This MonsterDub TRACK Before ItS gONE :evil: :evil: :evil: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:


HERES A NEW DUB TRACK IVE JUST FINISHED..
TRACK TITLED:RollzRoyze-THE INVASION.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zmduzbmnyjn/The Invasion.RollzRoyze.mp3
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Post by kraftpeanutbutterbear » Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:50 pm

my opinion :
lack of variation in here, you cannot make a dubstep track with only one note ! Ok, I've found the subtile changes but 5 min of this is a little bit boring, seems like an 'invasion' of bee flying over my head and I don't like when bees are flying around me. -q-
So good, good work for the sound you've use here but try making a melody with it, add something different to make it personnal.
Cheers
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Re: Get This MonsterDub TRACK Before ItS gONE

Post by rollzroyze » Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:10 am

kraftpeanutbutterbear..my opinion :
lack of variation in here, you cannot make a dubstep track with only one note ! Ok, I've found the subtile changes but 5 min of this is a little bit boring, seems like a bee flying over my head and I don't like when a bee is flying around me, it's agressing.
So good, good work for the sound you've use here but try making a melody with it, add something different to make it personnal.
Cheers......................

REPLY,
ROLLZROYZE...

a little to much feed back..before you can tell someone they should change there beat..make one your self. let me listen to yours then ill compare, but untill thenn.u shouldnt put to much sence out there./.

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Post by drum syndicate » Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:22 am

dude.. you're not gonna win anyone over by being a tnuc to someone who's giving you legitimate feedback on your tune

your tune needs more variety of sounds... i like the ideas you have... but before you flip the fuck out and piss back at someone who took time out of their day to listen to your tune and give you feedback... maybe you should think about the ideas presented and do a lil more work

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Post by amec » Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:28 am

lol sorry i love it (the banter that is)

he gives you feedback (which you're asking for) then cant take it... :lol:

yeh it lacks variety mate. among other things.
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Post by kraftpeanutbutterbear » Mon Aug 24, 2009 11:24 am

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Re: Get This MonsterDub TRACK Before ItS gONE

Post by rollzroyze » Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:40 pm

Amec

i can see what your saying, since your a producer..i only take feed back from ppl who no what there talking about..great beats bro..

and to the other guy..i am signed..not to a dubstep label..to a electro label..beacuse im not just a dubstep artists ..ive been in dub for acoupple months now but..ive been producing beats for years..ive done more shows and productions.. then you can count..ive played the same stage with huge names,.i have 4 alter-egos..the get paid individualy...so to you mister listener, seltionner, mixer, dj or watherver other..lol you dont even know what you are...fool


..to everyone else if you make beats.....word..i will be happy to take your feedback. with hart...but if not .no offence but i dont want your feedback.only from ppl with experience

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Post by B_90 » Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:49 pm

rollzroyze wrote:Amec

i can see what your saying, since your a producer..i only take feed back from ppl who no what there talking about..great beats bro..

and to the other guy..i am signed..not to a dubstep label..to a electro label..beacuse im not just a dubstep artists ..ive been in dub for acoupple months now but..ive been producing beats for years..ive done more shows and productions.. then you can count..ive played the same stage with huge names,.i have 4 alter-egos..the get paid individualy...so to you mister listener, seltionner, mixer, dj or watherver other..lol you dont even know what you are...fool


..to everyone else if you make beats.....word..i will be happy to take your feedback. with hart...but if not .no offence but i dont want your feedback.only from ppl with experience
I'm sorry mate but this forum is designed so that up and coming producers, signed producers and total novices can post there dubs up and get feedback. To actually have someone take their time to check yor tune and give you appropriate feedback should be welcomed by you not shuned back in their face. Also Dj's are more likely to know what their talking about as their job is to find music that they think their crowd will like.
You may be singed in other genre's but if you have that attitde in this genre you will be put aside, we don't have time for you.
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Re: Get This MonsterDub TRACK Before ItS gONE

Post by drum syndicate » Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:55 pm

rollzroyze wrote:
..to everyone else if you make beats.....word..i will be happy to take your feedback. with hart...but if not .no offence but i dont want your feedback.only from ppl with experience

lol... you really think the producers here are going to be the ones tho are going to play your tunes out?

maybe you should post this in the production forum if you want more production minded people checking your tunes

dubs forum is for people who want to put their music up for everyone alike to get feedback from.

your attitude is gash bro. maybe all that hip hop is going to your head.

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Post by rollzroyze » Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:26 pm

lol... you really think the producers here are going to be the ones tho are going to play your tunes out?

maybe you should post this in the production forum if you want more production minded people checking your tunes

dubs forum is for people who want to put their music up for everyone alike to get feedback from.

your attitude is gash bro. maybe all that hip hop is going to your head.


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you no what bro 8) im not going to even talk shit..because ,ya ive been djing decks for years..i find joy in coming to this forum and finding dope tracks to support...but ya if i dont like a track..i dont start messaging the person telling them how they show do this and that to how i want it to sound..

when theY dont even make beats .they dont even realize how complicated it is tO realLY get a wobble to wobble right...without soundING like whats already out there..or to even make a peace of music production..

dubstep dosent have to sound like this song or that song..it all depends on how you listen to it..and how it makes you feel at that moment ,if it turns you off ..then move on ,dont detroy.

if i dont like a beat it dosnt lack production its just not what i like..
so i move on,i dont destroy there style.

But im not mad at him.IVE ALREADY GOT 32DOWNLOADS ON IT OFF THIS SITE.AND Because im new to the dubstep scene..
but im not new to the electronic scene..ive been doing production work before this forum and myspace was invented ,so im not Going to let one OR 2 djS get me down..matter of faked ive stoMped a dj before for talking trash..but im not like that no more..LOL im a bigger HOMIE..

PEACE
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Re: Get This MonsterDub TRACK Before ItS gONE

Post by rollzroyze » Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:32 pm

B-90


YO MY BOY KERO FROM DETROIT UNDERGROUND WOULD LOVE THE REAPER.AND PROBLY PUT IT ON WAX ON THE LABEL IF HES FEELING IT..THATS HIS STYE OF DUB.IF YOU WANT ILL SEND YOU A EMAIL

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Post by B_90 » Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:34 pm

rollzroyze wrote:you no what bro 8) im not going to even talk shit..because ,ya ive been djing decks for years..i find joy in coming to this forum and finding dope tracks to support...but ya if i dont like a track..i dont start messaging the person telling them how they show do this and that to how i want it to sound..

when theY dont even make beats .they dont even realize how complicated it is tO realLY get a wobble to wobble right...without soundING like whats already out there..or to even make a peace of music production..

dubstep dosent have to sound like this song or that song..it all depends on how you listen to it..and how it makes you feel at that moment ,if it turns you off ..then move on ,dont detroy.

if i dont like a beat it dosnt lack production its just not what i like..
so i move on,i dont destroy there style.

But im not mad at him.IVE ALREADY GOT 32DOWNLOADS ON IT OFF THIS SITE.AND Because im new to the dubstep scene..
but im not new to the electronic scene..ive been doing production work before this forum and myspace was invented ,so im not Going to let one OR 2 djS get me down..matter of faked ive stoped a dj before for talking trash..but im not like that no more..LOL im a bigger HOMIE..

PEACE

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You should realise your putting your track up to feedback. you got it very constructive feedback too. You clearly demonstrate your attitude as being disgusting. Either get a better attitude or shut the f*ck up.
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Post by rollzroyze » Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:44 pm

LOL I WAS TRYING TO BE THE BEIGGER MAN..I WAS GOING TO HOOK YOUR TRACK UP TO SOME ONE THAT DESIGED M-AUDIO TORQ AND MANY OTHER PROGRAMES AND HAS BIGGER CONNECTS THEN YOU WOULD ONLY DREAM OF


BUT ILL BE THE BIGGER MAN AND STOPE HERE..CAUSE I NO IF WE WERE IN THE SAME ROOM ,YOU WOULDNT TELL ME TO SHUT THE F UP..BECAUSE :twisted: I WOULD DO THINGS TO YOU YOU COULDNT IMAGING..I WOULD SHOW YOU A REAL F@#*ED UP SITUATION THAT WOULD END YOUR PERFECT WORLD :evil: ..SO LETS BE BIG MEN AND STOPE THIS INTERNET SHIT TALKING.

.......PEACE..................... 8)

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Post by B_90 » Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:49 pm

rollzroyze wrote:LOL I WAS TRYING TO BE THE BEIGGER MAN..I WAS GOING TO HOOK YOUR TRACK UP TO SOME ONE THAT DESIGED M-AUDIO TORQ AND MANY OTHER PROGRAMES AND HAS BIGGER CONNECTS THEN YOU WOULD ONLY DREAM OF


BUT ILL BE THE BIGGER MAN AND STOPE HERE..CAUSE I NO IF WE WERE IN THE SAME ROOM ,YOU WOULDNT TELL ME TO SHUT THE F UP..BECAUSE :twisted: I WOULD DO THINGS TO YOU YOU COULDNT IMAGING..I WOULD SHOW YOU A REAL F@#*ED UP SITUATION THAT WOULD END YOUR PERFECT WORLD :evil: ..SO LETS BE BIG MEN AND STOPE THIS INTERNET SHIT TALKING.

.......PEACE..................... 8)
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im simply telling you how this forum works. I havnt even listened to your track purely because i dont like it when someone is aggresive to someone who has taken time out for you. If you want to be the bigger man say sorry to that guy, then let this thread drop to the bottom. Then maybe you can try again and get the feedback you want. My first ever feedback on this forum was
You need to spend alot more time on these tracks dude im really not feeling them Try doing this *loads of advise*
So i listened to the advise and used it and didnt get defensive on the feedback and thanks to me listening i have improved tenfold.
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Post by kramitman » Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:53 pm

sounds aren't bad, but the tune needs more depth and layers.

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Post by drum syndicate » Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:02 pm

rollzroyze wrote:you no what bro 8) im not going to even talk shit..because ,ya ive been djing decks for years..i find joy in coming to this forum and finding dope tracks to support...but ya if i dont like a track..i dont start messaging the person telling them how they show do this and that to how i want it to sound..

when theY dont even make beats .they dont even realize how complicated it is tO realLY get a wobble to wobble right...without soundING like whats already out there..or to even make a peace of music production..

dubstep dosent have to sound like this song or that song..it all depends on how you listen to it..and how it makes you feel at that moment ,if it turns you off ..then move on ,dont detroy.

if i dont like a beat it dosnt lack production its just not what i like..
so i move on,i dont destroy there style.

But im not mad at him.IVE ALREADY GOT 32DOWNLOADS ON IT OFF THIS SITE.AND Because im new to the dubstep scene..
but im not new to the electronic scene..ive been doing production work before this forum and myspace was invented ,so im not Going to let one OR 2 djS get me down..matter of faked ive stoMped a dj before for talking trash..but im not like that no more..LOL im a bigger HOMIE..

PEACE
I'm not telling you that your tune has to sound like something else... All I was saying is you should probably add some variety to that lead.

And for the record... the DJ's are the ones that will be buying or playing your tracks... so if you make shit that's uninteresting.. do you think you're gonna get any support? Granted, people have different opinions.. and I wasn't slagging your talent.. was giving legit feedback.

If you wanna run any of my credentials... I have a pretty large amount of well known and established producers who send me music on a regular basis for my feedback. I happen to have a good ear.. and have pointed out things to these people that have helped them to tighten up their tunes and get them signed. I refuse to name drop, but I can guarantee you I've been doing it since I was playing dnb which was a number of years ago.

Take the CONSTRUCTIVE criticism in a constructive manner. Don't belittle someone because they're not a producer. I don't make beats on my own but I've definitely spent my fair share of time in the studio with my friends who do produce. I do know that it's not easy.. because if it was then a lot of other folks would be doing it.

I never once tried to destroy your style... just give you some feedback on what you could maybe do to enhance it. That's what this forum is for. For people who listen to and love the music to discuss it... with people who want to hear feedback about their tunes.

I wont deny that you have some potential with these tunes... but how many of those people who downloaded the tune or listened actually said something to you about it? How much actual critique and feedback have you gotten? From where I'm looking, I see 75 or so views on this thread, but only 3-4 people have said anything to you.

No-one is here to destroy your sound or talk down on you because of it. The reason you've been called out is because of your attitude and outward demeanor.. and in this place.. if you're a tnuc you're gonna get written off pretty quick.

So chill the fuck out... get as much feedback as you possibly can and use it in a positive manner.

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Post by B_90 » Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:02 pm

ok ive downloaded it and i always believe in second chance so ill give you some feedback i f you dont like it then well, read my comment above.

To the track i on the other hand do like the fact you have used that same note over its a good dance floor track.

My suggestions would be have a dark pad or synth along side it. And alternate the octaves of the main bassline. perhaps drop one octave down after a little while.

On the whole decent track and if youd let me id use the mp3 in a mix im doing.

remember everyone who posts on this forum sometimes incredible producers get feedback they dnt want from time to time. but thats a good thing because it means you can better yourself.
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Post by rollzroyze » Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:32 pm

YA IM JUST LEARNING THIS PROGRAME.SO IT MIGHT SOUND NOT SO PERFECT..BUT ILL GET THE HANG OF IT...I HAVE MASSIVE BUT..IM BOARD OF IT CAUSE I USED IT FOR MY OTHER PRODUCTION STUFF..BUT THIS ONE IM USING NOW IS CALL..



Stelsi Virtual Synth

http://www.livealoud.com

ITS DOPE.CHECK IT OUT..IT HAS ALL THE SAME STUFF AS MASSIVE BUT FORGET EVERYTHING ELSE AND MAKE ITS ONLY FUNKTION IS TO WOBBLE HARDCORE..

NEED DLL.FILE MESSAGE ME.

BUT YO MYBAD FOR ALL THE DRAMA..

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Post by drum syndicate » Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:49 pm

that livesynth page has a TON of stuff. i'm gonna check a few of em out. will defo check the one you mentioned


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