Sorry, I dont know how to put the player in
so I just put the address.I\m from Latvia and I'm new in producing dubstep, this is my one of the first tracks and I wanted to have some comments about that and maybe some advice. Thx!
Jeramy Hollow - Chosen One
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jeramy_hollow
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Jeramy Hollow - Chosen One
http://soundcloud.com/jeramyhollow/jera ... chosen-one
Sorry, I dont know how to put the player in so I just put the address.
I\m from Latvia and I'm new in producing dubstep, this is my one of the first tracks and I wanted to have some comments about that and maybe some advice. Thx!
Sorry, I dont know how to put the player in
so I just put the address.I\m from Latvia and I'm new in producing dubstep, this is my one of the first tracks and I wanted to have some comments about that and maybe some advice. Thx!
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jeramy_hollow
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jeramy_hollow
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Re: Jeramy Hollow - Chosen One
i dont think that you dont have anything to say...
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muttleydubs
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Re: Jeramy Hollow - Chosen One
sounds cool man,
all sounds really reverberated, possibly too much low end on the kick...and i'd say you need more of a prominent lead synth line - kinda sinks into the background
drum variations are good, and it's all quite full sounding...but yeh i'd just work on getting a memorable synth line in there if you're going for a dancefloor vibe (?)
all good as a tune though
oh, and to put the soundcloud player in a post, click the "soundcloud" button when you're writing the post and put that address inbetween the soundcloud tags
all sounds really reverberated, possibly too much low end on the kick...and i'd say you need more of a prominent lead synth line - kinda sinks into the background
drum variations are good, and it's all quite full sounding...but yeh i'd just work on getting a memorable synth line in there if you're going for a dancefloor vibe (?)
all good as a tune though
oh, and to put the soundcloud player in a post, click the "soundcloud" button when you're writing the post and put that address inbetween the soundcloud tags
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jeramy_hollow
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Re: Jeramy Hollow - Chosen One
thanx for to feedback ))) try to do my best
yae, i'll play it on the dancefloor, cos I'm a DJ here in my country )))
yae, i'll play it on the dancefloor, cos I'm a DJ here in my country )))
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