needs critique on first few dubs

[miasma]

im new to producing.
ive been fucking around on fruity loops demo so i can only render them as audio files.
So i cant save where i left of so with that said please listen to the songs on my myspace page . it would be greatly appreciated.
good or bad idont care add me and throw me a line or two fucking teach me a lesson idont care just fucking do it
www.myspace.com/ryanloveshismusic

[clone-a-side]

buy some software !
for the 1st tunes you have made i think they r good .
i remember my 1st beats you couldnt call it production
but work is needed i think the tunes r a bit too mad couldnt find something strong in the tunes to really keep me hooked.
it was the same bars going over n over ,
i like to add n change parts through out the beat .
learn automation with the software you use .
over all tho good 1st try !!
keep erm coming

[miasma]

thanks man i hear yah!

[myspace.com/lilkato25]

Yea the first track on your player was mellow, but very repetitive. Also I was waiting for a drop or some other noise or synths or melodies to come in, but they didnt. you created the tension, but you also gotta release it, This is just my opinion.

But it being your first few tracks it was cool. Add some more wobble also. Im no expert as I have just started making dubstep also. Check out some of my stuff and let me know what you think. Also i was from Aliso Viejo,Ca but moved to oakland for school at expression. Check it lemme know http://myspace.com/lilkato25