New Memeber, New tunes for you to listen 2 :D

[Simian Joe]

hey there i'm new to the dubstep forum, but have been producing for a few years

i have put up a soundcloud site with all my productions on,

there are two dubstep tracks and the rest are drum and bass and techno/trance

http://soundcloud.com/m-audio-production

the dubstep tracks are called *The Game and * Down In Town

please feel free to be harsh bastards about my tracks and thanks for taking the time to listen

cheers
Joe

[synthtk900]

the game sounds like there are 2 styles at once and a little quiet, not feeling that one.. but down in town is pretty sick nasty. I like that quick second of the drop at 2.37 that's pretty ill I downloaded that one gonna listen to that at work now I just need to make some art for my ipod. pretty sick though. now im gonna listen to the rest keep it up bro

[Simian Joe]

thanks man, yeah defiantely a bit of a banger,

personally I prefer the track "the game" more, lovin the smooth luvvlys you see.......... was it the ore aggressive wobble that you think clashed with the rest of the track?
maybe i could soften it up a bit

thanks for your listen though, and any feedback is greatly appreciated

[synthtk900]

the bass and the horn-like sounds are in competition when they are overlapped at 1.30ish but the simpler ones sound good with the bass like at 2.30 i think.. just my preference but mainly im not digging the legato parts of the horns but the quick hits fit pretty well. the horns from 2.30 to 2.45 are good then they sound off at 2.46 to 3.00. i just feel they need changed

[Simian Joe]

awesome feedback dude 5*****
basically i think that the timing of some of the notes is still a little out 2:46 so will go over with that with the fine tooth maybe i will change it to the offbeat stabs but this will probs be tomoz been well busy recently and havent had anytime to check forums or do any production also i think that the bassline comes in too heavy at 2:30, and that, that part of the bassline should be dropping at about 2:00 mins instead.... so i feel a massive re-arrangement coming and a re-post :/