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trystan seven
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OH NO! NOT THE BEES! NOT THE BEES! Free 320s available

Post by trystan seven » Mon May 10, 2010 6:59 am

Working on some new bass synths and styles. I'm open to suggestions. Not really sure if I should be proud of these piece or not, or if it's even dubstep.

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http://trystanseven.bandcamp.com/track/wickerman

Be sure to tell me your thoughts. If you hate it, love it, not sure. It doesn't matter, I like the feedback. :D

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Re: OH NO! NOT THE BEES! NOT THE BEES! Free 320s available

Post by pandacub » Mon May 10, 2010 9:23 am

had a listen...
I'm really feelin the tones of the intro in terms of the pad...
the snare sounds criss but there may be a few things you could do moving up to the first drop on 1:20 in terms of cutting lows out, increasing reverb tails, to increase the impact of when the drop hits...

on 1:20 and after, its intense...
there are a lot of sounds going on for quite a long time, there is always the risk of listening fatigue, ever 8 bars or so cut at least one element and re introduce another, switch it up...
that way the tune will still sound full but not get too repetitive...

but theres a lot of energy and power in the palette of sounds your using, it sound clean...

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