Advise On A Tune!!

[realistic-prod]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1i1KUY8eio
Im new to the dubstep scene.
Just need to know if this song is any good?
And where i need to improve.
Thanks

[drlego]

dunno if its just youtube but the sounds are very thin. Doesnt sound rich enough. Your drum pattern is plain.

Its a nice idea for a track but the sample for me is over played and the clear quality of the sample actually makes the pallette used for the synths and the drums sounds worse. The track doesnt really sound as if its intended to go together, just something that has been added as an after thought.

I would think about going back and working on the drums (make them more interesting, using different drums or sound. Try to tie the song into itself better. Maybe loose the sample (full metal jacket has already been sampled so much)

keep on plugging away and deffo look at the production forum hear for all the hints and tips you need.