Railed - Serious Wheels

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Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by railed » Mon May 17, 2010 12:18 pm

Tried not to get this one dutty, more like old dub tracks... Enjoy!

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Update: Flanger added to the Pluck! and changed the lead sound a bit...
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by railed » Mon May 17, 2010 12:21 pm

Giving out 320s if you guys want 'em, hit me up on soundcloud...
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by HATTER » Mon May 17, 2010 12:34 pm

Thats fucking nice man. Really hypnotizing. I especially like around 1m50 when that other snare comes in. I didn't expect it and it totally lifts it. And that change of melody around 2m18 is perfect. The only thing I'm not sure about is that robotic sound that comes in 2m45, i think its a bit loud and it gets a bit repetitive at times. Also, I think the tune ends a bit abruptly.
I'm feeling that bassline too man.
Nice work.
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by railed » Mon May 17, 2010 1:06 pm

HATTER wrote:The only thing I'm not sure about is that robotic sound that comes in 2m45, i think its a bit loud and it gets a bit repetitive at times. Also, I think the tune ends a bit abruptly.
Thanks for these comments dude, I'm just trying to get alot of feedback before deciding the final version to put out on my EP...
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by railed » Mon May 17, 2010 4:52 pm

Counted Hatter's advice and made a few changes, anyone else think this track could be improved, how?
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by Jah Billah » Tue May 18, 2010 8:04 am

Nice constructive feedback from the Hatter. So you are going for that old dub 8 bit sound eh? Lol. Really nice sub action get tings going. Computer synth stll to loud pull it down say 3-5 dBs.
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by railed » Tue May 18, 2010 9:34 am

New version up now...
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Re: Railed - Serious Wheels

Post by HATTER » Tue May 18, 2010 4:27 pm

YES! Love it. I like the fade you put in there but it still cuts some of the bassline off.

Keep it up. :D
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