Progression Is Painful

[NoirPantalon]

I have two tracks here and really need some help on deciding where to go with them, both are quite ambient. Really would appreciate some feedback, and after hearing these if someone would like to do a collaboration feel free to talk to me about it. Here are the two tracks:

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This one has a Jazzy chord progression, I really want to know should I use the dissonant or harmonic chords for the intro?

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This is arpeggio, I was wondering if I should maybe drop it into something filthy at the end or drop it and bring it to an old school dub vibe?

All feedback is appreciated, positive or negative.
Thanks

[NoirPantalon]

Also, I was wondering if anyone knew of a dubstep remix of 'Yolanda Be Cool ft. D-Cup - We No Speak Americano'

[TheDeffGuyzz]

With regards to the first one, I think it sounds better / darker with the dissonance and the percussion is nice, just maybe turn it down a little as it is abit loud over the synth. You should possible change the progression slightly, and maybe cut the length of it slightly?

The second one, I think possible try and get it into a filthy drop, but that might be quite hard? Not sure, but the arpeggio is a nice sound.

Look forward to hearing what you do with it

[NoirPantalon]

@TheDeffGuyzz Cheers, will deffo have a go at improving it. Thanks for the feedback

[Cillit Bang]

Progression isn't always necessarily about improving.

[NoirPantalon]

Progression isn't always necessarily about improving.

I know, I want to know how to move the track forward. But improvement comments help also, jah?