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the_riddl3r
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by the_riddl3r » Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:21 am
Check it out, it's in my signature. I had found a few dubstep remixes of this song, but none i'd found were filthy enough for my tastes, so I'm in the process of dumping my own maggot infested trashcan all over another great song.
NOTE: THIS IS NOT DONE YET. However, positive comments are appreciated, and positive criticism would be very helpful
*Edit* Taking it out of my signature. the more i listen to it the more it bugs me, and the less i want it all over the forums. But here it is, so that maybe I'll still get a few good comments on it.
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MrReplay
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by MrReplay » Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:42 am
don't you mean constructive critiscism?

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LA_Boxers
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by LA_Boxers » Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:59 am
pissedone wrote:don't you mean constructive critiscism?

Stop critiscising his spelling. He wants it on his song.
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the_riddl3r
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by the_riddl3r » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:18 pm
hahahaha well obviously yes, thats what I meant.
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Pesticle90
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by Pesticle90 » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:22 pm
decent up until 1:03..
that is all.
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boxxy
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by boxxy » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:42 pm
^agree'd
LA_Boxers wrote:pissedone wrote:don't you mean constructive critiscism?

Stop critiscising his spelling. He wants it on his song.
spelling? the guy didn't even spell the word constructive... what are you talking about??
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Sparxy
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by Sparxy » Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:16 pm
Pesticle90 wrote:decent up until 1:03..
that is all.
This
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the_riddl3r
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by the_riddl3r » Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:41 pm
here's a question.... did any of you even listen to the whole thing? i actually HATE the whole beginning minute and a half, i should have fixed it before i posted it. but i dont think the ending is so bad. correct me if i'm wrong.
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boxxy
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by boxxy » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:05 pm
yes, i listened to the whole thing... had it up loud till the metallic farts started. for me, that style of midrange grate is not pleasant. drop the mids, increase the subs would be my only comment. the rest of the sounds are good, shame to cover them with that noise, imho
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grunt
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by grunt » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:06 pm
Pesticle90 wrote:bearable* up until 1:03..
that is all.
fixed
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the_riddl3r
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by the_riddl3r » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:07 pm
thanx boxxy, see thats (positive) constructive criticism. helpful. :]
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the_riddl3r
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by the_riddl3r » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:09 pm
so, u guys think if i fixed that wobble to not be so harsh on the ears, it'd be a decent song? :]
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gergbot
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by gergbot » Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:56 pm
the_riddl3r wrote:so, u guys think if i fixed that wobble to not be so harsh on the ears, it'd be a decent song? :]
it's your track at the end of the day. i just can't hear anything because of that...noise above it.
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HatchetDown
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by HatchetDown » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:04 pm
I thought it was good up until I heard Donald Duck doing Whippets and jerking off. Honestly the wobbles need to be A LOT more subtle and work with the drum pattern a bit better. Your sample placement was pretty good in my humble opinion and I love where it dropped off with just the beat and De La Soul. The only wobble section I really enjoyed was from 1:45 to 2:00. If you tied in a fairly soft but deep bass line on top of the rap, it's the type of shit people trance over as long as you do it right.
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Xavy
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by Xavy » Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:04 pm
WOW! Halfstep wobble over a pop song. You must be the first person ever to think of that!
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the_riddl3r
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by the_riddl3r » Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:01 am
hahaha xavy i think ur trolling me ^^ thanx for the info guys, i'll get to it. its not about if i like it, its about pleasing everyone (while making music i can enjoy

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lildwell
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by lildwell » Sat Jul 31, 2010 6:57 am
boxxy wrote:yes, i listened to the whole thing... had it up loud till the metallic farts started. for me, that style of midrange grate is not pleasant. drop the mids, increase the subs would be my only comment. the rest of the sounds are good, shame to cover them with that noise, imho
this
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spire
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by spire » Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:34 am
itd be nice if the midrange wasnt turned up to a million and you could hear the drums.
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gergbot
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by gergbot » Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:20 pm
the_riddl3r wrote:hahaha xavy i think ur trolling me ^^ thanx for the info guys, i'll get to it. its not about if i like it, its about pleasing everyone (while making music i can enjoy

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whats the point then? let your fans come to you, not the other way round
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AbandonSilence
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by AbandonSilence » Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:10 pm
grunt wrote:Pesticle90 wrote:bearable* up until 1:03..
that is all.
fixed
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