My First attempt

[KBS]

Feedback would be nice and any tips on method and sound samples would be appreciated also if there is any major faults give me a shout.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QyH8jrtQ-ik
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[KBS]

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[vyvyan]

Hi there!

Well realize, but a few remarks.
- This is only wobble, nearly. Try to play more with other instruments added to this wobble bass. This brings also to the second point...
- This is quite long: only one instrument, some little film breaks, isn't enough to make it not boring. Try to add some changing:
-> breaks in the rythms (forget one kick, add one, add a snare...etc)
-> new instruments (a hithat or light snare, or nice light sound on the bottom which changes...)
-> Maybe, a longer break would make it well.

This is just my point of view, maybe more a question of taste and style than anything else!
Otherwise, the dark "death-bodies-walking-everywhere-around-me" atmosphere is here and works. Well done, and courage for the following!

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[Subgore]

Like what vyvyan said, try to use different instruments to mix thing up a bit, but for first try it is very good. What DAW did you use?

[KBS]

thanks for the advice i'm going to mess around with more instruments. and mix the drumming up abit.