Shudder - Airlock

unsigned forum members' tracks & place for feedback
Forum rules
By using this "Dubs" sub-forum, you acknowledge that you have read, understood and agreed with our terms of use for this site. Click HERE to read them. If you do not agree to our terms of use, you must exit this site immediately. We do not accept any responsibility for the content, submissions, information or links contained herein. Users posting content here, do so completely at their own risk.

Quick Link to Production Forum
Locked
ShudderProductions
Posts: 11
Joined: Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:31 pm

Shudder - Airlock

Post by ShudderProductions » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:34 pm

Please gimme some feedback, peace

Soundcloud
Top
User avatar
jaimelee
Posts: 578
Joined: Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:59 am
Location: Glasgow, Scotland.

Re: Shudder - Airlock

Post by jaimelee » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:47 pm

I was totally expecting a massive boom at the start.
Try throwing in a nice quiet loop at the intro, maybe have the low end cutt out so it goes with the high of the initial synth.
Love the glide on the bass, maybe a wee bit fatter on the sound overall.
Other than that I like it.
:D
Top
ShudderProductions
Posts: 11
Joined: Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:31 pm

Re: Shudder - Airlock

Post by ShudderProductions » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:30 pm

jaimelee wrote:I was totally expecting a massive boom at the start.
Try throwing in a nice quiet loop at the intro, maybe have the low end cutt out so it goes with the high of the initial synth.
Love the glide on the bass, maybe a wee bit fatter on the sound overall.
Other than that I like it.
:D
Hey, thanks for the feedback :) The version you had a listen too was a bit messed up, few drum loops were out of place or missing... Here is the remade version please have a re-listen and lemme know what you think? Bearing in mind I didn't re-make considering your feedback *I've only just read it* :P

Soundcloud
Top
Kill The Computer
Posts: 18
Joined: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:10 am

Re: Shudder - Airlock

Post by Kill The Computer » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:45 pm

I like it. Maybe it's just the speakers I'm listening on but it sounds like the mid range bass might be a bit too loud. It's a common mistake with dubstep producers to turn up the bass too loud. Try taking like some mid range out of it and adding some low end and it'll be perfect. Peace.
Top
ShudderProductions
Posts: 11
Joined: Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:31 pm

Re: Shudder - Airlock

Post by ShudderProductions » Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:07 pm

Kill The Computer wrote:I like it. Maybe it's just the speakers I'm listening on but it sounds like the mid range bass might be a bit too loud. It's a common mistake with dubstep producers to turn up the bass too loud. Try taking like some mid range out of it and adding some low end and it'll be perfect. Peace.
Cheers, I haven't had a chance to really test this track out on a proper system or anything, just being monitoring with headphones so yeah you're probably right... Thank you for the feedback! :)
Top
User avatar
el haijn
Posts: 157
Joined: Tue Jun 10, 2008 10:06 am
Location: AUSTRIA
Contact:
Contact el haijn

Re: Shudder - Airlock

Post by el haijn » Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:22 pm

nice idea. but i can't here a bassdrum, dude... did u forget it?
El Haijn - Monkey Dub (CAN), Tripstep (AUS), Stoke Audio (GER), INTERNET RECORDINGS (GER), twenty12 (US), Dubbullet Records (GER)

http://soundcloud.com/el-haijn
http://myspace.com/elhaijn

also visit

http://www.ginyu.at <- for mixes, infos, pics & free tunes
Top
ShudderProductions
Posts: 11
Joined: Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:31 pm

Re: Shudder - Airlock

Post by ShudderProductions » Thu Dec 16, 2010 7:01 pm

el haijn wrote:nice idea. but i can't here a bassdrum, dude... did u forget it?
There's a fairly quite 808 kick in there which is quite low pitch wise :P at 1:30 you should be able to hear it fairly easily...
Top
Locked

Return to “Dubs & Tunes for Feedback”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests