Mellowish Remix - Feedback Appreciated

[onewingedangelokc]

This really was the result of a bout with writers' block, so I wouldn't call this a proper production effort. The original track that is the basis of this "remix" is one of the default projects that is included with FL Studio: 4one - Surrealism (Original)

I exported the majority of the original sequences to .wav to make my life a little easier, & added a little vocal piece that I pulled from Looperman (I think). I didn't put as much thought into the sub bass as I probably should have; most of my focus was placed on the drums.

I've always struggled with writing anything that could even remotely be considered "mellow" or "chill"; considering that I didn't really change a lot here, I'm not claiming this as a proper remix, but the overall "feel" of the result is generally what I'm aiming for.

Feedback is most appreciated, particularly in the "sub bass" field; I've always struggled with it, so any advice to correct any problems would be greatly appreciated.

Here yas go: Soundcloud