Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

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Ponch
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Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

Post by Ponch » Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:13 am

Hi dubstep forum goers!

So about like maybe 6 months ago I started messing around making music on my laptop. Ive made some real shitty stuff and some gems over the years but ive never actullay shared any of it to be discussed and critiqued :x

I have recently completed a song im pretty proud of and now I present it to the internet for feedback! Its called Biohazard and I went with some real dark atmosphere (at least tried!)

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Please let me know what you think, all feedback will be helpful im just a novice at this!

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Re: Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

Post by Ponch » Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:10 pm

Bump >_>

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Re: Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

Post by Ponch » Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:12 pm

Bump once more

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Re: Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

Post by mikus » Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:06 am

Liking the atmospheric intro. Try making the different synths flow better. The switches seem a bit too drastic.

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Re: Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

Post by RazeMusic » Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:53 am

not judging your knowledge at all, but sounds like you need a bit better music theory, some of those wobbles are just jumping at random intervals which makes it sound a bit random and there is no melody in the background when the wobbles come in. The part when your building up an atmosphere after the drop either needs to last less time or their needs to be some fx sweep or something as it does sound quite messy. also you might want to play around with the eq on your kick and snare and maybe add a bit of verb to the snare? dont know the kick seems like its clashing with the sub at some parts and the snare just seems a little harsh at others. But apart from that im liking the sound of the tune man, would like to hear this when more stuffs been done to it (:

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Re: Ponch BIOHAZARD Dubstep (Check out my tune!)

Post by Ponch » Tue Jan 25, 2011 6:50 pm

Ok thank you for the input! I do have very little knowledge of music theory, I should look into that and try making the wobble switches flow a lot better. Ill work on this tune a bit more, learned a lot so far making it

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