[FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

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Zoobi
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[FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by Zoobi » Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:11 pm

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If you're listening, thanks a lot.

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by hutyluty » Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:19 pm

This is really nice- kind of hypnotic
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by hasezwei » Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:41 pm

i like the idea, sounds really oldschool (big compliment here)! but it somehow lacks... a focus, a hook or something. doesn't even have to be a melody, but something that drives the track. at the moment it seems like it's dragging along a bit.
but it's really good nonetheless, i like things stripped back and minimal. the echoed percussion is great, the samples and atmospheres are cool. maybe the snare/rimshot sound could use a tad of reverb (not too much tho, just that it fits into that sense of space the rest of the song has).

keep it up!

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by In10t » Wed Feb 09, 2011 7:07 pm

Good production man.

Deep sounds, never really heard anything like it.

I have to totally agree with Hasezwei with the common element part, something on both drops.

The track sounds dark, like Silent Hill should have this on their soundtrack.

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by BakedKhan » Wed Feb 09, 2011 7:52 pm

Deep, Dark + minimal. How i like it

Zoobi
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by Zoobi » Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:49 pm

thanks for the feedback really appreciated. working on this tune now.

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by rhek » Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:30 pm

Wicked perc. Really like the snare sound. Good FX hits, structure works well but i agree, needs something in the high mid range to drive the track, something dry and attacky.

Cool vibe though.

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by Zoobi » Thu Feb 10, 2011 1:51 pm

Listen to the newer version, same soundcloud link at the top. Any negative feedback/constructive criticism is highly appreciated, gonna work on this until it's perfect. Thanks!

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by Code Zero » Thu Feb 10, 2011 2:43 pm

nice drum works, heavy sub. The atmo elements that come in at the end... i wouldn't mind if they would allready start at first drop :)

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Zoobi - Poltergeist. Atmospheric darkness!

Post by Zoobi » Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:05 am

thanks for feedback mate. Bump

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