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Alt Fire
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[Feedback]Everyone is Mad (headnodding dubstep)

Post by Alt Fire » Mon Mar 07, 2011 7:07 am

This is my fourth project and is it still very much a work in progress. I found the sample after starting on the track but it seem to fit pretty well. Would love to hear what you think and what could be improved upon.

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Re: [Feedback]Everyone is Mad (headnodding dubstep)

Post by fred8785 » Mon Mar 07, 2011 7:16 am

I really like the intro melody, and that sample.
A lot of it sounds pretty empty to me, especially between :40 and 1:20, maybe adding some sub bass could help fill it out

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Re: [Feedback]Everyone is Mad (headnodding dubstep)

Post by Alt Fire » Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:02 am

Thank you. Got a bit wrapped up and forget that little key point.

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Re: [Feedback]Everyone is Mad (headnodding dubstep)

Post by Nacklewicket » Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:22 am

sounds like uve got some low bass goin but way too low.. i agree with above tune feeling very empty sorry this wasnt very headnod friendly listen to anything by 12th planet and listen to the beautiful rhythms there uve got some serious headnodding business goin on. be inspired!!

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Re: [Feedback]Everyone is Mad (headnodding dubstep)

Post by TheBrownie » Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:30 am

This is really nice, I enjoyed it actually. At first I thought my headphones were shorting out but then I figured out it was the song, silly me. I like how it's choppy, makes it really interesting. I liked the sample you used for the vocals :P

It was a little empty after it "dropped" and I don't know really what to do about that. Turn the sub bass up a little bit more so it's not just an ominous tinge to the song. Or add FX, I can never find really good FX, but maybe you can. I like the idea that you had though, the bass you're using is nice, very robotic. O.O

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Re: [Feedback]Everyone is Mad (headnodding dubstep)

Post by Alt Fire » Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:44 am

Thank you all for the suggestions, even the guy that didn't nod his head (I'm not the world's best music classifier...I nodded my head while listening). Will be adding 12th Planet to my playlist, but I don't have a sweet rasta vocalist to round it out yet. Will put out an ad.

I have gone back over it and made some updates.


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