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[FEEDBACK] When will it stop (ruins lives)

Post by Elartsen » Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:37 pm

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hey guys n gals been tryin to make dubstep for a few months now, would love to know what you think :W:
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Re: [FEEDBACK] When will it stop (ruins lifes)

Post by fragments » Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:52 pm

Pretty solid for only being at it a few months. Around 2:38 the drums get pretty muddy, drop out of the mix. I want just a tad more snap and verb to the "primary" snare. Personal preference here, but I'd loosen up the toms in the intro. Feels like a little space would add some groove to them. Take a hit out in the pattern somewhere? I think just minus one drum hit in the loop might do it.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] When will it stop (ruins lives)

Post by Elartsen » Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:19 pm

Thanks. totally agree! :D
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Re: [FEEDBACK] When will it stop (ruins lives)

Post by rhek » Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:04 pm

Try find a fuller punchier Kick. The snare punches through nicely but there's no punch to the kick to back it up, I reckon this'l glue your track together more.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] When will it stop (disgustidubstep)

Post by Elartsen » Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:53 am

thanks to you both! i feel the track is finished now if ya wanna check it out? let me know ya thoughts!Soundcloud
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