Take Me to the Sun (Chill, ambient)

Kromly · Post by **Kromly** » Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:06 pm

Looking for some feedback on one of my newest projects. I want it to sound as good as it can! Am going to play this at an open mic night on campus in two days to show people who I am and the music I make. I've only been doing this for about 5 months so I need as much feedback as possible to better myself and my music.

Please and thank you!

Also, the vocals are all chopped up (as you can tell) and there's a lot of clicking happening at the beginning of every little 'syllable' so if someone could give me a tip on how to get rid of and/or hide them, please let me know!

I appreciate it.

Kromly

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hutyluty · Post by **hutyluty** » Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:46 pm

the vocal melody thing is really nice, for the clicking at the start you might want to just increase the attack on them a tiny amount (if youre using a smapler that can do that) which

I'm not a fan of the wubby bit, i think the more acidy melody at the end is absolutely lush though. Also I think the tune lacks a bit of depth at the bottom end, you may want to increase the sub level, warm the mix a bit- its a bit sparse and cold at the moment

really nice tune though mate

SK0Hdubstep · Post by **SK0Hdubstep** » Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:09 am

Really nice vocal work mate

I usually have a similar sor of issue with the clicks when chopping vocals but it looks like hutyluty has taken care of that one so cheers. But yeh I definately think that the second drop is much better than the robotic synth. Just get some low end in there and work on the mixdown a bit and its gunna be a sick track. Great work.

Kromly · Post by **Kromly** » Tue Mar 08, 2011 3:45 am

Cheers guys.

what do you recommend me do with the wobble in your opinions? what appeals to you as listeners?

also, if i didnt use them in a sampler (might be a novice technique but i put them all just on the same audio track), are there any other methods I could use to remove the clicks? Or would I most likely have to load them into a sampler like the exs24 and do it that way? I'm on logic if that helps.

thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it!

hutyluty · Post by **hutyluty** » Tue Mar 08, 2011 4:07 pm

well with the wub i would stick a low pass filter on it, reduce the highs to make it less harsh?

and yeah maybe with the clicks you could automate the volume so you fade in to each vocal noise if you get wat i mean though- its not ideal though and it could sound even wose, give it a go though

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