Secret Garden - Toy Robot

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ToyRobot
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Secret Garden - Toy Robot

Post by ToyRobot » Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:44 pm

Hey, so heres a dubstep track I just made. I kinda wanted to try something different :) hope you guys enjoy!

As always feedback is appreciated and there is a download link!

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Ryptics
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Re: Secret Garden - Toy Robot

Post by Ryptics » Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:21 pm

Intro is cool! maybe try layering up the synth abit more, and using more reverb on it also, the main wobble is ok but unless this is the sound your after, try adding some light distortion, and generally turning it up as its very quiet in the mix. also alot more reverb as it sounds extremely dry!

your sub is pretty much nonexistent, turn the velocity up on the piano roll, have you layered the sub bass separate? or is that just the bass from the wobble?

the snare is very snappy and could do with a bit more thump, try layering another snare without the hi, one with abit more low end or just a more thumpy one so it gives the all round sound of the snare abit more punch.

the notes and synths are good, I really like them, but they kinda overpower the rest of the elements like what I mentioned above, try these see how you get on. hope this helps

ToyRobot
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Re: Secret Garden - Toy Robot

Post by ToyRobot » Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:18 pm

hey Ryptics, thanks for the tips! I am definitely gonna rework this track, and ya, now that im listening to it more, I need to add a LOT more sub.

I appreciate your comment though, thanks!

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Re: Secret Garden - Toy Robot

Post by Ryptics » Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:29 am

no probs dude, makes so much difference when someone else gives it a listen, helps me alot! glad I could help, post again when you finished, would like to hear the updated version!

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