[FEEDBACK] 2-stepy kinda thing WIP

[chemicalbliss]

Been messing around with this today and was wanting some input. Idea's of where to take it? ect
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[3za]

The backwards sort of click sound I am not sure on I like it because it's a bit different, but it seems to stick out a little to much, and gets a little annoying after a bit. I might turn it down a bit, or very it up a bit more, or loss it altogether. Now that percussion sound that first comes in @ 0.29 I really like that, I would bring that out more in the mix. Now at 1.22 is were I start to like this track, but the intro is to slow, I think you could shorten it, or rework it.

I like that your trying to do something a little different to the crowd, I would like to hear what you come up with in the end.

Peace,
3za.

[chemicalbliss]

cheers for the feedback, i couldn't agree with you more about the backwards click thing, i put it in last and overused it, i'm gunna take it out of the first part all together and leave it as it is after 1.10 and turn it down a bit. By intro do you mean up untill 1.22?
peace

[3za]

By intro do you mean up untill 1.22?

Yeah

[kaiori breathe]

Pretty much what 3za has to say. Drop the volume a little on that clicky thing, but other than that it's a pretty interesting track with some nice atmospheres, I'd like to hear a bit more going on in the percussion at times but that might just be personal taste.

[chemicalbliss]

Yer i think i'll shorten the start and add some more with some more percussion layering in.
cheers guys

[chemicalbliss]

UPDATED!

Didn't get round too more percussion, but had a wee fiddle, added some shit, took some away. think i sorted that click. Same questions apply,

Thoughts?

[chemicalbliss]

recently realised this isn't the place for w.i.p's, but still, shameless bump.
thoughts?
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