The vocals I'm saying are brought in nicely are the ones brought in through the intro. The rapping vocals I feel they fit, you should upload a version without them and post them to the site so those who wish to review can compare the two! It'd really help to be able to hear it without them
And thank you very much, I enjoy that track quite a bit myself, haha! I'm definitely following you on Soundcloud man, dig your style.
P.S.
I added another track to my thread, if you could check that out and give me some input on it too I'd be very grateful.