First track - Feedback appreciated

[hood_e]

Hey guys,
I'm new here and new to producing. What lies in my sig is the last 7 hours of putting together everything Im capable of so far. Any feedback would be appreciated

[hutyluty]

right man- well first of youve got some good sub in there in the intro- the samples are quite dirty- perhaps find some cleaner ones? and you need to sync it better to the track its not cut from edge to edge so its not in time. Also- you might consider putting a gap in before the drop- little bit of silence.

Drums, very simple beat repeated- you need some switchups and changes, try make a 64 bar drum loop with each one different to start with- i'd like to see lots more hi hats and maybe a little reverb on there.The bass is far too loud at the drop, the drums are drowned out there too
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You want to be using an equaliser on your bass here, so that its not swallowing the whole thing- and then maybe you can add some more elements- a pad/ piano melody

anyway, not bad for a first try- keep it up

[Monstro]

Not bad for a first effort, but what do I know, my song is also a first effort. I feel the wibble wobs could be a little cleaner and more defined and I dunno if I am relly feelin the lil john thing, at least I think its lil john.

Feedback for feedback?

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=192829

[hood_e]

hey guys thanks for the help. I know its rough but i wanted to get something out there before I went stir crazy! Another beautiful rainy day here so gonna go over it and hopefully have ver2 tonight.