My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
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My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Last edited by Gonzzzor on Sun Apr 17, 2011 4:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Far too wobbly for me!
The main "tyre-wobble" sounds a little bit too special to my ears. The break is quite cool though!
Nice good first work, but a "wobble specialist" could tell you more.
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The main "tyre-wobble" sounds a little bit too special to my ears. The break is quite cool though!
Nice good first work, but a "wobble specialist" could tell you more.
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Last tracks, free dl!
Inside (deep/experimental): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=236886
Speculoos Dub (dubby): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
Vyvyan - Escape EP [FLAK Records] OUT NOW!
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http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=226038
Inside (deep/experimental): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=236886
Speculoos Dub (dubby): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
Vyvyan - Escape EP [FLAK Records] OUT NOW!
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http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=226038
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Thanks for the input mate, glad you liked the break!
The song was produced and mastered mainly with headphones. not ideal, i know. Maybe thats some of the reason it sounds "too special" on your speakers/phones?
Love your song "Colours", amazing atmosphere!
The song was produced and mastered mainly with headphones. not ideal, i know. Maybe thats some of the reason it sounds "too special" on your speakers/phones?
Love your song "Colours", amazing atmosphere!
Last edited by Gonzzzor on Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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This is psychodelic. Strange woobles but nice
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Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
Could use some better mixing but you've definitely got some interesting sounds in there!
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Thank you! I like your song, the break is sick!PetreMathislavMusic wrote: This is psychodelic. Strange woobles but nice
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yep, I know.. I feel like mixing and mastering is where i lack the most, but i guess that's pretty universal. Thanks for the advise!ohmicide wrote:Could use some better mixing but you've definitely got some interesting sounds in there!
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One of the more inventive dubstep tunes that features wabblez I've heard lately, nice mix of deep and bro, works well, although I imagine people will be divided on that, the deep headz will probs want you to move away from the wobbles, the bro-steppers will want you to get darker etc, still, nice style and ideas, quite a fun tune in terms of the mix you've got going on. Well done. Love that guitar slide sound, works really well, if that's what it is, sounds like one, but not sure.
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+1 kaiori breathe, this track has personality, that's for sure!
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Last tracks, free dl!
Inside (deep/experimental): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=236886
Speculoos Dub (dubby): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
Vyvyan - Escape EP [FLAK Records] OUT NOW!
4 tracks + 1 Free!
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=226038
Inside (deep/experimental): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=236886
Speculoos Dub (dubby): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
Vyvyan - Escape EP [FLAK Records] OUT NOW!
4 tracks + 1 Free!
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=226038
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interesting idea's !
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Wow, I am humbled! you seem to have a lot of insight. If you are thinking about the guitar sounds at the ending of the break, that's a tweaked version of a patch called "ambient soundscape" from exode (I use reason).kaiori breathe wrote:One of the more inventive dubstep tunes that features wabblez I've heard lately, nice mix of deep and bro, works well, although I imagine people will be divided on that, the deep headz will probs want you to move away from the wobbles, the bro-steppers will want you to get darker etc, still, nice style and ideas, quite a fun tune in terms of the mix you've got going on. Well done. Love that guitar slide sound, works really well, if that's what it is, sounds like one, but not sure.
Thanks for all the support guys! this is my first post on this forum, and i must say this seems like a very good community. I will definitely lurk around some more and hopefully post some new shit in the near future. Atm I'm trying to make something a bit more approachable, but it'll still be weird and psychedelic, no worries!
Btw, how do i change the topic icon?
Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
You could try editing the first post in the topic? I don't know if that works but it should!Gonzzzor wrote:Wow, I am humbled! you seem to have a lot of insight. If you are thinking about the guitar sounds at the ending of the break, that's a tweaked version of a patch called "ambient soundscape" from exode (I use reason).kaiori breathe wrote:One of the more inventive dubstep tunes that features wabblez I've heard lately, nice mix of deep and bro, works well, although I imagine people will be divided on that, the deep headz will probs want you to move away from the wobbles, the bro-steppers will want you to get darker etc, still, nice style and ideas, quite a fun tune in terms of the mix you've got going on. Well done. Love that guitar slide sound, works really well, if that's what it is, sounds like one, but not sure.
Thanks for all the support guys! this is my first post on this forum, and i must say this seems like a very good community. I will definitely lurk around some more and hopefully post some new shit in the near future. Atm I'm trying to make something a bit more approachable, but it'll still be weird and psychedelic, no worries!
Btw, how do i change the topic icon?
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Can't find anything, guess you have to do it when you make the thread.. thanks for the suggestion tho!
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Well, don't be too positive: sometimes, you won't have any interesting feedback i must tell you!
Naturally, if you comment, you'll have more chances!
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Naturally, if you comment, you'll have more chances!
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Last tracks, free dl!
Inside (deep/experimental): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=236886
Speculoos Dub (dubby): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
Vyvyan - Escape EP [FLAK Records] OUT NOW!
4 tracks + 1 Free!
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=226038
Inside (deep/experimental): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=236886
Speculoos Dub (dubby): http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
Vyvyan - Escape EP [FLAK Records] OUT NOW!
4 tracks + 1 Free!
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=226038
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ez!
i like the 1st wobble synth and like the break but where the tune goes a bit weird think could done things differently to keep the heavy flow going ...
not personally a massive fan of brosteppy esk dubs ....
nice ideas overall
i like the 1st wobble synth and like the break but where the tune goes a bit weird think could done things differently to keep the heavy flow going ...
not personally a massive fan of brosteppy esk dubs ....
nice ideas overall

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Re: My first release! All feedback is greatly appreciated
yes, of course. I've only made one comment outside this thread so far, will definitely work on that. remember, i've only been here two days!vyvyan wrote:Well, don't be too positive: sometimes, you won't have any interesting feedback i must tell you!
Naturally, if you comment, you'll have more chances!
ty! The tune i'm working on now is more constant.BLACKSMOKEMONSTER wrote:ez!
i like the 1st wobble synth and like the break but where the tune goes a bit weird think could done things differently to keep the heavy flow going ...
not personally a massive fan of brosteppy esk dubs ....
nice ideas overall
will have a listen to your stuff.

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Well, it's not my cup o tea, but it's a great first attempt. My first attempt...well...let's not go there.
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This is fraking phat. Wobble...wobble...wobble... Good...cinematic...stuff. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, mate. Carry on....
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I like the percussive peaky low end wobbles here, even though I'm more the mid range grind kinda guy. nice work
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Dope wobbles man!!
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Spenca wrote:Well, it's not my cup o tea, but it's a great first attempt. My first attempt...well...let's not go there.
shroomhead1 wrote:I like the percussive peaky low end wobbles here, even though I'm more the mid range grind kinda guy. nice work
DjMiLo wrote:Dope wobbles man!!
Thank you, thank you, thank you and a very big thank you!notchfiend wrote:This is fraking phat. Wobble...wobble...wobble... Good...cinematic...stuff. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, mate. Carry on....

I will, eventually, listen to all your stuff and comment if i have something relevant to say, I'm just so geared up and busy trying to finish the next song right now!
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