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- WeaponsOfExpression
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Re: check out my song
you have a filthy style, thats cool. try to bring your bass out more, like make it stand out. Also your hat hits are a little repetitive imo, but its a cool track man.
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Re: check out my song
first of all thanks for the feedback i realy appriciate and i am gonna try to work on the bass problemWeaponsOfExpression wrote:you have a filthy style, thats cool. try to bring your bass out more, like make it stand out. Also your hat hits are a little repetitive imo, but its a cool track man.
Re: check out my song
i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up
Re: check out my song
did you just personify your track and talk to it? lolBangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up
but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!
Re: check out my song
no i was talking about yours not minekolstrom wrote:did you just personify your track and talk to it? lolBangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up
but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!
Re: check out my song
thank for the feedback really appreciate itBangley wrote:no i was talking about yours not minekolstrom wrote:did you just personify your track and talk to it? lolBangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up
but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!
Re: check out my song
no problem. i look forward to hearing more stuff from you
Re: check out my song
I lol'd!kolstrom wrote:did you just personify your track and talk to it? lolBangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up
but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!
My advice on this would be to get a more defined melody structure, at least at some parts. To me this is just a series of fx with a nice beat, a rather cool series of fx tho. Some parts are groovy, but overall the samples and "not-melody-sounds" are taking up to much space in my opinion. keep it up!:)
Re: check out my song
Gonzzzor wrote:I lol'd!kolstrom wrote:did you just personify your track and talk to it? lolBangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up
but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!
My advice on this would be to get a more defined melody structure, at least at some parts. To me this is just a series of fx with a nice beat, a rather cool series of fx tho. Some parts are groovy, but overall the samples and "not-melody-sounds" are taking up to much space in my opinion. keep it up!:)
this was my first song i ever made but thanks for the feedback i am going to pay more attention on my next song
Re: check out my song
It's not a bad first try at all! Sorry if i sounded a bit harsh. I'm just trying to give you some constructive advice
I'm no pro myself, just telling you what i think would sound better to me!

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