First Track, Need Some Feedback/Advice

[Artie_Fufkin]

Hello DSF! I would greatly appreciate any feedback on this. I'm having trouble with the mix and I need some help taking the next step in my production. I will listen to your song and give feedback for feedback on mine. Thanks!

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[gpivo1]

Nice man! I like your synthwork! I reckon try not to overdo the drums too much in the intro, they are nice drums and you wouldn't want to ruin that by throwing 'em all over the place also, maybe give the snare a little more low-mid range roughly 200Hz I'd say. After all that, you could TRY giving the sub a little more weight but really it sounds fine from here (no harm in trying though).
You'll have yourself a dope tune bro. Peace

[Artie_Fufkin]

Thanks, man! I really appreciate it. For giving the sub more weight, what would you suggest? Should I put some chorus on it or detune it? And I get what you're saying about the drums. I'm a drummer and I tend to overplay so I guess that must've leaked in. haha
I listened to Face Crack. I'll post in your thread now.

[antics]

Don't chorus your sub as this will make it a lot weaker. I think the sub is probably fine for the style of dubstep :S

I really like the break down, maybe make the sub decay a bit more instead of being so constant.

Regarding the drums, make sure the kicks and hats are building some swing, so I would say drop some of the kicks in the intro, particularly the ones which are doubled up. I also think you should fiddle with the 3 snares in a row, change the velocity and timing of them to get it a bit more natural.

[Artie_Fufkin]

Thanks antics! Definitely gotta fix up the drum arrangement. That 3 snare phrase is annoying me now lol Definitely overused. I'm currently listening to your song and will shoot you a post in your thread.