Matthew West - My Dreams (deep)

unsigned forum members' tracks & place for feedback
Forum rules
By using this "Dubs" sub-forum, you acknowledge that you have read, understood and agreed with our terms of use for this site. Click HERE to read them. If you do not agree to our terms of use, you must exit this site immediately. We do not accept any responsibility for the content, submissions, information or links contained herein. Users posting content here, do so completely at their own risk.

Quick Link to Production Forum
Locked
edwardjjohnston
Posts: 14
Joined: Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:13 am
Location: croydon

Matthew West - My Dreams (deep)

Post by edwardjjohnston » Sun May 01, 2011 11:50 pm

Soundcloud

Would love some feedback :D
Soundcloud

aim:edwardjjohnston
Top
User avatar
konduit
Posts: 18
Joined: Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:05 am

Re: Matthew West - My Dreams (deep)

Post by konduit » Mon May 02, 2011 7:37 am

your going to need to vary that bass line a bit to keep people interested or put in a melody line in somewhere, but otherwise i would kill to hear this on a massive rig dude.
Top
User avatar
Gonzzzor
Posts: 45
Joined: Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:44 pm
Contact:
Contact Gonzzzor

Re: Matthew West - My Dreams (deep)

Post by Gonzzzor » Sun May 08, 2011 11:50 pm

Yea, i think variation is key. The sound is awesome :)
Top
Shum
Posts: 9851
Joined: Sun May 16, 2010 9:14 am

Re: Matthew West - My Dreams (deep)

Post by Shum » Mon May 09, 2011 12:01 am

That clap could use a tight snare to give it a bit more bite as well. As everyone else has said, a bit of variation would be nice as well. Change of bassline after the breakdown, maybe some "modulated" (phase, panning, etc) percussive element would be some suggestions.
Top
Locked

Return to “Dubs & Tunes for Feedback”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests