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Exile - Alchemist

Post by ExileDubstep » Fri May 13, 2011 1:11 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-uoc8A1W ... ideo_title

Just asking for some constructive criticism, it's one of my first tracks! Thanks!

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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by ExileDubstep » Tue May 17, 2011 11:41 pm

Bump. Any feedback would be appreciated.

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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by AnomiK » Tue May 17, 2011 11:50 pm

it sounds good mate. if anything, i feel your bass could be heavier. but a solid effect like ohmnicide could do that. good work.
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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by AnomiK » Tue May 17, 2011 11:51 pm

your track Somewhere is pretty nice too, i like the build to those big gooey wobs at 1:50
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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by efence » Wed May 18, 2011 12:14 am

more meat less gravy

needs more bottom end

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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by ExileDubstep » Wed May 18, 2011 12:33 am

Thanks so much for the feedback, I just put all my tracks onto souncloud as well

http://soundcloud.com/exiledubstep

So more lower end, Well I'll definitely get on that.

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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by ExileDubstep » Thu May 19, 2011 2:37 am

Here's a newer song, It's called "Somewhere"

http://soundcloud.com/exiledubstep/somewhere

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Re: Exile - Alchemist

Post by MedikProductions » Thu May 19, 2011 2:57 am

no likey the snare, reminds me of playing the drums and the beads come off and i'm like ahh shit. you seem to have a good idea of how dubstep works, good cutting in and out of drums and stuff, you're just lackign heavy bass on them wobbles (as stated above 10 times). also never do a 25 second fade out lol. but you can underly wobbles with subbass or just eq the wobble itself. try changing up the drum patterns as well, the same old stuff gets old, we're a new generation with attention spans the size of atoms. transitioning is also a key point in dubstep production- you don't just transition for the drop, background sounds like lazer sound effects and gliding sounds up and down is very common to have in the background at any point. can add emphasis or it can help transition to anything (like from drop to relaxed part). ok i've said enough http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=199663 lemme get sum feedback on my latest track =]
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