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Gonzzzor
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by Gonzzzor » Thu May 19, 2011 3:07 am
Trying out some very different stuff on this one, again. Not sure if this qualifies as dubstep? Needed a little break from the heavy wobbs. Hope you enjoy, and feedback is always appreciated
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deranger
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by deranger » Thu May 19, 2011 6:05 am
Cool intro. Nice panning on the bell thing. The drop is pretty cool. Quite adorable

Could use some more bass. The atmospheric aspects of the production are very well done. The drums are a little weak, especially in the B section. I would add some more bass and layer up the drums a bit. The break right before the end is a bit random. Having the wobble come in at the end also seems misplaced. It doesn't really fit. If you are going to use that wobble I would bring it in earlier in the track. It could use a little more structure and focus.
Overall, not bad.

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Gonzzzor
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by Gonzzzor » Thu May 19, 2011 7:49 pm
Thanks deranger! This was meant as an exercise in atmosphere more than anything, so i'm thrilled you pointed that out! I agree about the drums and the bass, just wanted to do something different. usually my tunes have lots of bass, and maybe a bit more structure haha. heres an example
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And yes, random wobbles are random. it was meant as a tease/joke, maybe not so well thought out:P
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