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Antman - Lasers *Feedback WANTED*

Post by antman » Sun May 29, 2011 9:49 pm

Hey guys, been working really hard on this one. Any feedback is appreciated! Negative OR positive! Thanks

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Re: Antman - Lasers *Feedback WANTED*

Post by Lectric » Sun May 29, 2011 10:25 pm

Intro and breaks: Intro is a tad dry, i think it runs on a bit long so maybe shorten it, also add some atmospheric loops under it to fill out the sound and maybe reverb some of that synth. For the drums try some ride cymbals or closed hats. also im a fan of adding things during the first break so maybe some background hats with swing on them.

I really like the bassline. i like how it almost opens up with the wavetable position. however i think the drums could use some open hihats for some more energy.

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Re: Antman - Lasers *Feedback WANTED*

Post by feetdontfailmenow » Sun May 29, 2011 11:37 pm

You could do with a little sidechain compression on the kick and b-line, not so its especially noticeable, but just enough that it comes through a bit cleaner.
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Re: Antman - Lasers *Feedback WANTED*

Post by Monstro » Mon May 30, 2011 2:48 am

Also needs a remastering and I would really layer that main "laser" synth with another noise to thicken it up. Not a bad attempt, but it def has some room for improvement.

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Re: Antman - Lasers *Feedback WANTED*

Post by antman » Mon May 30, 2011 5:04 pm

Thanks for all the feedback so far guys! :W:
cmgoodman1226 wrote:I don't know what you all are going on about. I listened to it on my beatz by dre headphones that my parents bought me for mixing, and the sub sounds huge! stop hay-in'.
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