Kind of a weird track I made

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booglez
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Kind of a weird track I made

Post by booglez » Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:46 pm

I made this between last night and this morning and just figured I'd post it up to get a response. I'm not really sure what to categorize this under. So, here!


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booglez
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Re: Kind of a weird track I made

Post by booglez » Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:11 am

Bump.

If anyone would like to throw in any tips on mix/mastering, that would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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MrAural
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Re: Kind of a weird track I made

Post by MrAural » Tue Jun 07, 2011 11:29 am

It should be called "bbb dance" or skank.
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Re: Kind of a weird track I made

Post by wub » Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:19 am

I like the rhythm, good pace to it - got a soca feel to it in terms of programming. Think you're over relying on the midrange bass riff a little bit too much for the track to be truly interesting though. Needs a few more elements being introduced and maybe a switch up in rhythm on the back end of the tune.
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booglez
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Re: Kind of a weird track I made

Post by booglez » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:26 pm

Thanks! I'll work on that idea. This is the first thing I've made in ableton so I'm still kind of feeling it out.
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Re: Kind of a weird track I made

Post by wub » Thu Jun 09, 2011 6:44 am

You've got a strong starting point, fair play. Have a fiddle with the elements I've mentioned above, and feel free to drop me a PM should you make any changes 8)
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