IN NEED OF CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.

[letsgr1nd]

just started doing electronic music months ago and i'm addicted all i do is sit in my room and make music, been a musician for 15 years and i sit for hours and try to make my synths sound perfect, but i'm not completely satisfied yet, please give me feedback if you can help. pointers appreciated.
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[FuhNetIk]

Pretty good all around, only criticism is that your bassline sounds like it is being played too low - it is all much to heavily distorted in the low end. Try maybe playing it on higher notes and adding a clean sine sub underneath it to give it that bassy oomph to compensate

[Big Freq]

Bassline sounds very muddy. let off the distortion. I like the "gameboy" feel. You have some good ideas, just work out the kinks and you'll have yourself a tune.

[IOMac]

I love the bottom end on this and I like the gameboy part. The wobble bass works for most parts but it gets lost when the lfo gets too fast, like someone else said, it sounds muddy. Its sounds original though. Did you do the voicing at the start on a vocoder?

Please keep going on the tunes!, I'm sure the results will be worth it

If you fancy taking a listen to my latest piece, i'd appreciate the feedback

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[letsgr1nd]

thank you guys, the feedback was alot better than i thought it'd be. the voicing at the beginning was done in garageband with some effects on it. i'm gonna try out some de-mudding and we'll see what happens. any other feedback will be much appreciated.