Here's another I turned out real quick

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booglez
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Here's another I turned out real quick

Post by booglez » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:52 pm

I made this one last night. Still feeling around in ableton. This may or may not be finished (depending if I feel like finishing it). It's a drumsteppy kind of track. All tips/criticism/comments are appreciated.

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MrAural
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Re: Here's another I turned out real quick

Post by MrAural » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:55 pm

It just does not fit bro.
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booglez
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Re: Here's another I turned out real quick

Post by booglez » Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:00 pm

Could you elaborate at all on that? I would really appreciate it.

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Re: Here's another I turned out real quick

Post by MrAural » Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:20 pm

Your backing synths just dont fit with the actual bass.
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Re: Here's another I turned out real quick

Post by S1NTH3TIC » Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:10 pm

try slowing down that first bass sound for starters, something more chill would be fitting for that backing synth imo.
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