First song! Feedback?

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Matt4759
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First song! Feedback?

Post by Matt4759 » Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:12 am

http://soundcloud.com/matthewjensen/new ... y-mastered
Sorta dubstep? It's the first song i've completly finished.

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Re: First song! Feedback?

Post by hutyluty » Thu Jun 09, 2011 1:19 pm

Lots of interesting noises in there and my sub is rattling a little bit so theres some bass which is a good start. The drums are a very wide, as in they take up a lot of space in the mix, try and shorten the length on them so other elements can be heard.

The flow of ideas is quite offputting, just jumps from one to the other. Try starting with one noise and developing it through the song.

Also, turn everything down to stop it clipping
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