Horror- Feedback would be appreciated

[DannyBuzzin]

Soundcloud

Work in progress would really appreciate it if someone could give me some feedback, constructive criticism etc...

[SignalRecon]

I like the atmospheric woodwind flavor, i like your snare/clap mix. You could use a different bass (higher up than sub) because with the sub you have it soubds too generic/atmospheric. Its a pretty good start bro, auto pan to move you atmosheric elements around the field a bit would be really cool, and filter delay would give said elements much more interesting texture. /like what u have already tho.

[DannyBuzzin]

as in aswell as the sub ? I cant get rid of the sub, its half the melody bahah im gunna have a pan about see what sounds nice my headphones are fucked so im using shitty ones atm :/ not sure how the mix sounds properly cheers man

[DannyBuzzin]

anyone else ?

[SignalRecon]

Just gave it a whurl in my system, still really like the woodwind flavor, lol. And yes I meant as well as the sub. Just a nice top end bass bouncing along with the sub?

[DannyBuzzin]

top end and bass kinda contradict each other but im faffing on with it so il see what I can do

[mikus]

I like that vocal sample! Snare is TIGHT. Good progression in the intro. Other than a few EQ'ing issues to be clarified, the track is great I would personally kind of mirror the sub with the wobble. Might give it more weight?

[DannyBuzzin]

Cheers man aye yeah these headphones aren't the best like, where exactly is the EQ conflict ? I was gunna brake down into a part where either the wobble mirrored the sub or the sub mirrored the wobble near the end to fill it out

edit - is the ride causing EQ problems ?

[Nealge]

I'd like to hear more of the wobbles honestly. But everything else sounds good together. The smack of the snare is really nice, that seems to be the general consensus of this thread lol.

[DannyBuzzin]

I love seeing the word wobbles wrote down bahah I might try a bit of variation with them like, keep it fresh. Cheers to everyone about the snare n all im glad people like it

[JernalismUK]

As said above, the snare/clap mix is nice. I'd like to hear more creative rhythms with the drums and a variation of drum hits. Sub bass is sounding nice, just need to EQ a few things to fit in round it, and maybe turn the sub bass down a wee touch? Nice ideas throughout and I like the vocal sample too

[Nealge]

I love the word wobble

[PRR]

the vocal samples are great the tone of the voice is nice. the weakest part for me is the top end bass, it takes away from how atmospheric everything is. maybe mirror the sub with a top end that pitches down as well.